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Array ( [sid] => 86062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HE TRIED SO HARD [time] => 2005-03-01 03:13:07 [hometext] => To my guardian angel as he knows. It's just a story based on a life time of misery. [bodytext] =>

Heavenly

^A^Guidance^A^

^A^^A^

SultryRose's Signatures

She was an angry child
since she could remember
so little in her crib.
she's blocked it all out
A maniac depressive,
innocent child.
Had a painted on smile.

He was is a wise man
even tho he'd been
to hell-n-back so many times.
He tried so hard to
save her from herself.
She didn't know he'd
never forget.

The traps he set in
disguise she managed
to get thru to trip thru
all alone in her mixed
up tortured mind.
He'd never give up his
quest. She had no clue
he was he her best.

One day she felt
his touch behind
the word's empty demise.
She yeilded to life
on that cold night,
She didn't recognise
his face but touch she felt
in his eyes.

She's lived alone
so long gave up
on luv. when her heart
quit beating
Her life so dead it
seemded.
She understood now
why she'd been so mean.

He was always her guardian angel
she knew that from his gentle touch. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 34 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

HE TRIED SO HARD

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:13:07 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Heavenly

^A^Guidance^A^

^A^^A^

SultryRose's Signatures

She was an angry child
since she could remember
so little in her crib.
she's blocked it all out
A maniac depressive,
innocent child.
Had a painted on smile.

He was is a wise man
even tho he'd been
to hell-n-back so many times.
He tried so hard to
save her from herself.
She didn't know he'd
never forget.

The traps he set in
disguise she managed
to get thru to trip thru
all alone in her mixed
up tortured mind.
He'd never give up his
quest. She had no clue
he was he her best.

One day she felt
his touch behind
the word's empty demise.
She yeilded to life
on that cold night,
She didn't recognise
his face but touch she felt
in his eyes.

She's lived alone
so long gave up
on luv. when her heart
quit beating
Her life so dead it
seemded.
She understood now
why she'd been so mean.

He was always her guardian angel
she knew that from his gentle touch.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-03-01 03:13:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by dormen on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:20:26 AM AEST
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I love this poem. I've been somebodies guardian angel for a long time.

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 11:37:01 AM AEST
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That was just ... beautiful Emy.

( one tiny ... tiny thing .... seemed, only one D )

The rest ... flawless !!!

Nazmythian ~

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 12:55:22 PM AEST
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This reminds me alot of your other recent one, too.
And this is also just as beautiful.
I love some of the images in this, my friend.

Keep up the amazing work.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:20:43 PM AEST
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Another piece of great work to add to the rest of your wonderfully written work.
I throughly enjoyed this one Emy. Well done my friend

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 12:28:11 AM AEST
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Very good- thought provoking-
Thanks

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:28:11 PM AEST
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I love this! This is really awesome.

Scott

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:21:00 PM AEST
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Absolutely lovely!

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 03:24:34 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful emy. you have so much emotion in every thing you write. tears welt up in my eyes reading this. always a lovely experience reading what you write.

Ben

Re: HE TRIED SO HARD (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 17th August 2020 @ 04:00:55 PM AEST
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Lovely indeed

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