Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 11:36:56 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 86116 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Good-Bye [time] => 2005-03-01 16:48:51 [hometext] => My best friend jade wrote this one and wanted me to put it on here. [bodytext] => It's finally that time
That I realize you're no longer mine
I'm ready to move on
I don't see why it took this long
To see that you're no good for me
That with you isn't where I want to be
Like a game you played with my feelings
After all the pain, I'm finally healing
No longer will I be your toy
You may be 14, but you're still a boy
A silly, immature child
Hormones out there, running wild
I'm 13 and looking for more
Not the same weak girl I was before
No longer will I run to you
Whenever you want me to
No more sitting beside the phone
Being let down and feeling alone
I can't, I won't, I refuse
To live my life being used
But I really think you should know
This time, I'm really letting go
So when you get that feeling
Don't call me with your pleading
I won't be here waiting
I moved on, my love for you is fading
Good-Bye Trever, it's been and interesting ride
I won't let you bring me down anymore, I'm letting you go with pride
You were my first love, but now you're in the past
I promise, you won't be my last [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 52 [informant] => miss_erika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Good-Bye

Contributed by miss_erika on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



It's finally that time
That I realize you're no longer mine
I'm ready to move on
I don't see why it took this long
To see that you're no good for me
That with you isn't where I want to be
Like a game you played with my feelings
After all the pain, I'm finally healing
No longer will I be your toy
You may be 14, but you're still a boy
A silly, immature child
Hormones out there, running wild
I'm 13 and looking for more
Not the same weak girl I was before
No longer will I run to you
Whenever you want me to
No more sitting beside the phone
Being let down and feeling alone
I can't, I won't, I refuse
To live my life being used
But I really think you should know
This time, I'm really letting go
So when you get that feeling
Don't call me with your pleading
I won't be here waiting
I moved on, my love for you is fading
Good-Bye Trever, it's been and interesting ride
I won't let you bring me down anymore, I'm letting you go with pride
You were my first love, but now you're in the past
I promise, you won't be my last




Copyright © miss_erika ... [ 2005-03-01 16:48:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:51:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Excellent write! your friend jade should join ypdc, I want to hear more!


Re: Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:13:49 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
that was very good, very very good, for only 13 and able to write out her emotions like so, wow, that was a great write, not even 17 year olds can be intuned enough to get that point....




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com