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Array ( [sid] => 86171 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2005-03-01 22:42:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She flings herself across the room
And lands upon the bed
Groaning, she pulls the covers up over her head
And wishes she were dead

Of all the stupid things
She had to sleep with him
Not using her thought process
She went upon a lim

So eager to be loved
She'd do anything
Even if that meant
A simple one night stand

So she thought with her heart
And not with her head
And becasue of her carelessness
Soon she will be dead

And so she lives her life
Slowly day by day
And as time passes by
She slowly slips away [comments] => 1 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Ninnyfarfar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

untitled

Contributed by Ninnyfarfar on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

She flings herself across the room
And lands upon the bed
Groaning, she pulls the covers up over her head
And wishes she were dead

Of all the stupid things
She had to sleep with him
Not using her thought process
She went upon a lim

So eager to be loved
She'd do anything
Even if that meant
A simple one night stand

So she thought with her heart
And not with her head
And becasue of her carelessness
Soon she will be dead

And so she lives her life
Slowly day by day
And as time passes by
She slowly slips away

Copyright © Ninnyfarfar ... [ 2005-03-01 22:42:55]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 01:50:06 AM AEST
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awesome write,i liked this alot,and i got the point,i know 3 ppl going through the same situation,i try to help them out and show them that even though with each day passing is a day less to go that there r still many wishes to come true.awesome write,keep up the great job,i hope the best for ur friend

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