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It Breaks
Contributed by
TikiGodAK
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Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:30:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart It breaks
My soul It screams
This feeling inside wont seem to shift Will it be here till the day I die?
I wonder how things could be And why they end up the way they do
Is it fate? Is it destiny?
Or is it just bad luck? The dice rolled wrong...
I had a dream tonight You were there And for an instant everything was okay again...
I touched your face I kissed your lips I said, "I love you" And for once, you heard me
Then I woke And my heart screamed My soul turned My body ached
What is my destiny? What is God's plan for me?
I sure dont see it... I'm sick of living this way Yearning for a past love I want her back, but I know it will never happen So I move Step by step Day by day Looking for my little peace of mind I hope I find another
I hope I hope I hope
I find peace......In someones arms
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TikiGodAK
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2005-03-03 05:30:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It Breaks
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 05:58:43 AM AEST (User
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wow this one can break a heart, shatter it and make it melt.
it's very powerful, moving. ddeper than an ocean and widder than Texas.
Huggs,
emy
Oh yeah, a masterpeice. |
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Re: It Breaks
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:21:38 PM AEST (User
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I have felt like this so many times and to have someone write such a beautiful poem about it makes me want to cry.
You are such a talented writer and I cannot wait to read more. |
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