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Array ( [sid] => 86340 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loosing Control [time] => 2005-03-03 14:46:10 [hometext] => To judge or be judged ***Edited by Moderator_14, for spelling, as requested.*** [bodytext] => Breaking down a mind unfold
A story waiting to be told
To them around just the norm
They fail to see the pain in we
A door that opens no walking through
The wind that blows yet all is still
Inside a feel that you know it's real
A broken breath a soul to steal
Metal figures we all become
Striving forward to overcome
Restricted wheels that are told to turn
Yet all we are is there strings that yell
Kings and queens without our thrones
Yet we are but skin and bone
Time will speak the growth of mentality
And all will become as one and eternity




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Loosing Control

Contributed by mindset on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:46:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Breaking down a mind unfold
A story waiting to be told
To them around just the norm
They fail to see the pain in we
A door that opens no walking through
The wind that blows yet all is still
Inside a feel that you know it's real
A broken breath a soul to steal
Metal figures we all become
Striving forward to overcome
Restricted wheels that are told to turn
Yet all we are is there strings that yell
Kings and queens without our thrones
Yet we are but skin and bone
Time will speak the growth of mentality
And all will become as one and eternity








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Re: Loosing Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 03:20:32 PM AEST
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A weel written poem. A pleasure to read.




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