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through my eyes
The pain and aches
that I feel inside
I always made sacrifices
for you
Tarnished I want to feel
love anew
You're selfish, inconsiderate and
so unkind
I can't believe how I was so blind
Tears fill my eyes everyday
Just like the moon and its umbrae
Sadness dwells in the chambers of
my heart
Leaving me feeling unloved and
thwart
I thought that when I'd fall in love
I'd feel what angels have up above
Far from the truth I lay stranded
In a relationship always been commanded
I can no longer take this anguish
To think you loved me
Would only prove me foolish
One last thing I vow to do
Is to finally rid myself of you.... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 32 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Rid Myself Of You...

Contributed by mina-1 on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Why can't you see life
through my eyes
The pain and aches
that I feel inside
I always made sacrifices
for you
Tarnished I want to feel
love anew
You're selfish, inconsiderate and
so unkind
I can't believe how I was so blind
Tears fill my eyes everyday
Just like the moon and its umbrae
Sadness dwells in the chambers of
my heart
Leaving me feeling unloved and
thwart
I thought that when I'd fall in love
I'd feel what angels have up above
Far from the truth I lay stranded
In a relationship always been commanded
I can no longer take this anguish
To think you loved me
Would only prove me foolish
One last thing I vow to do
Is to finally rid myself of you....

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-03-05 05:25:51]
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Re: Rid Myself Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:19:45 AM AEST
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I hope there is one thing you never try to rid yourself of..........the ability to put down into words what you feel

Well done

Steve

Re: Rid Myself Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 09:33:48 AM AEST
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A beautifully heart-wrenching write. I do hope you find someone soon... someone who would do anything to give you the world. Keep your chin up.

Take care
- Becca

Re: Rid Myself Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 11:26:32 AM AEST
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beautifuly expressed wissh u well . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Rid Myself Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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Great write. I can relate. You don't need that person anyway...You deserve better.

Re: Rid Myself Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 06:26:05 PM AEST
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well written

Re: Rid Myself Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 11:20:54 PM AEST
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Right on sister! Stay strong. Much peace.

Re: Rid Myself Of You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kachina on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 08:11:34 PM AEST
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First of all, I would like to thank you for commenting on my poetry. You're is Great! And I totally understand exactly what you wrote. This is a magnificent piece. Keep up the good work.

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