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Two children
One boy
One girl
They turn to me
And I myself with the eyes
Of a looking glass,
See the bright light of truth
Which neither can see.

The girl,
Lost and confused in her own world,
Not yet knowing
What she has deep inside

Whisper you desires
Show me your fantasies
Bring me into your world.

The boy
Longing for a love once lost as a young child.
Not yet know
What he has deep inside

Whisper your desires
Show me your fantasies
Bring me into your world

Let me enter your heads
Eat at your brains
Boil your hearts
And burn your souls

Let me creep into your dreams,
As dusk.
When the moon pays it’s nightly visit

Feel me wrap my cold hands
Around your neck
Killing you slowly in your sleep
And end both your pains and problems

Then send your bodies
To the lowest level of Hell
Where all you have it each other
To see what you had wasn’t so bad.
To die again and again in your wrongs
And only dream about the rights.

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Grim Ripper

Contributed by Cherryteasecake on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 11:05:32 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Two children
One boy
One girl
They turn to me
And I myself with the eyes
Of a looking glass,
See the bright light of truth
Which neither can see.

The girl,
Lost and confused in her own world,
Not yet knowing
What she has deep inside

Whisper you desires
Show me your fantasies
Bring me into your world.

The boy
Longing for a love once lost as a young child.
Not yet know
What he has deep inside

Whisper your desires
Show me your fantasies
Bring me into your world

Let me enter your heads
Eat at your brains
Boil your hearts
And burn your souls

Let me creep into your dreams,
As dusk.
When the moon pays it’s nightly visit

Feel me wrap my cold hands
Around your neck
Killing you slowly in your sleep
And end both your pains and problems

Then send your bodies
To the lowest level of Hell
Where all you have it each other
To see what you had wasn’t so bad.
To die again and again in your wrongs
And only dream about the rights.

Copyright Â© Cherryteasecake ... [ 2005-03-06 11:05:32]
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Re: Grim Ripper (User Rating: 1 )
by nabokovfan87 on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 10:52:07 PM AEST
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liked the thought but seems very choppy when reading. see if u can fix and expand a little.

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