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The story on life,
Can be described in many ways.
Sometimes in the bible,
Sometimes in a praise.
The Islam Quran,
The Hebrew torah.
No matter what you read,
There's still death's aurora.
The Buddha of the buddhists.
The priest of a church.
They all have gods,
But hate still must lurch.
Can't you understand,
That no matter how much you pray.
Bad stuff will always happen,
And we still be in dismay.
You people pray for forgivness,
You pray for world peace.
Well who the ***** are your praying to,
The death rate won't stop to increase.
Tell me why you have religion,
And still we are at war.
Pray all you want,
But still your target will ignore.
Religion is something to believe,
But there is no proof of it being true.
Well, I hopes it just me,
But aren't your answers a little overdue?
Believe what you want,
For this is just what I think.
***** the whole damn world of hatred,
And now this holy water I must drink.

--Evan L.--

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Religion

Contributed by thepos on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:25:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Religion
The story on life,
Can be described in many ways.
Sometimes in the bible,
Sometimes in a praise.
The Islam Quran,
The Hebrew torah.
No matter what you read,
There's still death's aurora.
The Buddha of the buddhists.
The priest of a church.
They all have gods,
But hate still must lurch.
Can't you understand,
That no matter how much you pray.
Bad stuff will always happen,
And we still be in dismay.
You people pray for forgivness,
You pray for world peace.
Well who the ***** are your praying to,
The death rate won't stop to increase.
Tell me why you have religion,
And still we are at war.
Pray all you want,
But still your target will ignore.
Religion is something to believe,
But there is no proof of it being true.
Well, I hopes it just me,
But aren't your answers a little overdue?
Believe what you want,
For this is just what I think.
***** the whole damn world of hatred,
And now this holy water I must drink.

--Evan L.--

more of my poetry at http://thepoemsofsorrow.com

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Re: Religion (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:34:36 PM AEST
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I RESPECT YOU BELIEFS. WITH EVERYTHING THATS GOING IN THE WORLD, ITS HARD TO PLACE YOUR PRAYERS . I KNOW THERE IS A GOD, BUT THATS BECAUSE MY FAITH IS IN HIM. OVER ALL THAT WAS A GOOD POEM. MUCH RESPECT

Re: Religion (User Rating: 1 )
by Diatribe on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:24:11 PM AEST
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buddhism is the religion of no religions... it has nothing to do with a god or higher power... when they pray they are praying to their inner self(or inner buddha)... buddhism is the only religion that doesn't breed hatred... look it up. other than that... I know what you mean... religion is why there's war in our history... it is why there is hatred and genocide... religion breeds fear... and it teaches you to be insecure... religion is the cyanide of the masses. if this is a topic that interests you go to www.evilbible.com for some good arguments against the Bible... isn't it funny how the word LIE is right in the middle of the word beLIEve?

Re: Religion (User Rating: 1 )
by blueyes11 on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 11:47:05 PM AEST
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It's funny that such hateful words are spoken against hate.... seems a little hypocritical to me....

Re: Religion (User Rating: 1 )
by axeman on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 08:36:29 AM AEST
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you couldn't be more right about religion.
keep up the good work.

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