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Array ( [sid] => 86756 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => STREET VENDETTA [time] => 2005-03-07 16:56:42 [hometext] => THIS POEM IS ABOUT REVENGE. I ALWAYS WANTED VENGEANCE FOR MY FALLEN THUGS, BUT THERE IS ALWAYS ANOTHER WAY.PLEASE COMMENT AFTERWORDS [bodytext] => IF I WERE TO RETURN TO THE STREETS
I'D GO BACK WITH A VENGEANCE
PEOPLE WOULD SENSE MY PRESENCE
SO THEY WOULDN'T TELL ME THE TRUTH
THEY LIE AND FENCE IT
MY HEART WOULD TURN COLD TO SERVE OUT THIS VENDETTA
TO AVENGE THE DEATHS OF MY LOVED ONES
WOULD MAKE ME FEEL BETTER
NOMORE TRUCES
CANT TRUST ANY OF MY ALLIES
I'D LIVE BY THE MOTTO
ONLY THE STRONG SHALL SURVIVE
I COULDN'T SPEAK TO GOD
CAUSE HE WOULDN'T APPROVE OF MY DECISION
HE WOULD TELL TO BACK OFF AND WAIT
CAUSE THIS WASN'T APART OF MISSION
I'D WRAP MY FRIENDS FLAG AROUND MY HAND
LOAD THE CLIPS
AND TAKE CARE OF THIS LIKE A MAN
BEING FEARLESS WOULD BE WHY I'D FOLLOW THROUGH
IF I EVER GOT CAUGHT
THERE WOULD BE NO QUESTION ABOUT WHAT I'D HAVE TO DO
BUT THOSE ARE JUST THOUGHTS THAT RUN THROUGH MY MIND
CAUSE I KNOW THEIR DEATHS WILL COME
JUST NOT THROUGH THE HANDS OF MINE [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 65 [informant] => THUGGIN4REAL [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

STREET VENDETTA

Contributed by THUGGIN4REAL on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 04:56:42 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

IF I WERE TO RETURN TO THE STREETS
I'D GO BACK WITH A VENGEANCE
PEOPLE WOULD SENSE MY PRESENCE
SO THEY WOULDN'T TELL ME THE TRUTH
THEY LIE AND FENCE IT
MY HEART WOULD TURN COLD TO SERVE OUT THIS VENDETTA
TO AVENGE THE DEATHS OF MY LOVED ONES
WOULD MAKE ME FEEL BETTER
NOMORE TRUCES
CANT TRUST ANY OF MY ALLIES
I'D LIVE BY THE MOTTO
ONLY THE STRONG SHALL SURVIVE
I COULDN'T SPEAK TO GOD
CAUSE HE WOULDN'T APPROVE OF MY DECISION
HE WOULD TELL TO BACK OFF AND WAIT
CAUSE THIS WASN'T APART OF MISSION
I'D WRAP MY FRIENDS FLAG AROUND MY HAND
LOAD THE CLIPS
AND TAKE CARE OF THIS LIKE A MAN
BEING FEARLESS WOULD BE WHY I'D FOLLOW THROUGH
IF I EVER GOT CAUGHT
THERE WOULD BE NO QUESTION ABOUT WHAT I'D HAVE TO DO
BUT THOSE ARE JUST THOUGHTS THAT RUN THROUGH MY MIND
CAUSE I KNOW THEIR DEATHS WILL COME
JUST NOT THROUGH THE HANDS OF MINE

Copyright © THUGGIN4REAL ... [ 2005-03-07 16:56:42]
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Re: STREET VENDETTA (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:03:17 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Don't forget there's always your daughter to think about as well. You're right though, they will die eventually. A moving write, insightful and well written. Thanks for sharing.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: STREET VENDETTA (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 05:05:58 PM AEST
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I like this - the rhyming and meter are good, so it flows nicely. The anger/frustration comes out in the capital letters. I'm glad I stopped in to read this. Tiffany J.

Re: STREET VENDETTA (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 09:09:20 PM AEST
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A very strong and essensial peice of writting

make sure u r it's most ardent reader . . . well

done . . . Dorian Chambers

Re: STREET VENDETTA (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:40:23 AM AEST
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Very good work here.
It's great that u found a better way.
U should be very proud of this write.
a masterpeice as it's a testimony that one can change.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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