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Array ( [sid] => 86808 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hiding in the Shadow of the Sun [time] => 2005-03-08 00:31:41 [hometext] => may be difficult to fully understand unless you read through it a couple of times...comments are always good [bodytext] => we can hide all day long in the shadow of the sun,
and stay a guaranteed death from the barrel of his gun,
he sees us through the lies in which we hide under,
and he'll hit us with lightning without warning by thunder,

im just counting the days that dont count themselves,
wasting away with these books i keep on my shelves,
we are grapes turned to prunes that shrivel to dust,
in my window god built that we cant adjust,

life is so short in which life doesnt live,
if it never happened theres nothing to forgive,
and he ensures that our feet will hold to the ground,
with invisible chains to make sure we drown,

and when tears fill the earth and the pits of our hearts,
that is the time in which our soul departs,
to heaven if it floats or to hell if it sinks,
that depends if our mind could break the chain links. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => enjoiskating6 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Hiding in the Shadow of the Sun

Contributed by enjoiskating6 on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:31:41 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

we can hide all day long in the shadow of the sun,
and stay a guaranteed death from the barrel of his gun,
he sees us through the lies in which we hide under,
and he'll hit us with lightning without warning by thunder,

im just counting the days that dont count themselves,
wasting away with these books i keep on my shelves,
we are grapes turned to prunes that shrivel to dust,
in my window god built that we cant adjust,

life is so short in which life doesnt live,
if it never happened theres nothing to forgive,
and he ensures that our feet will hold to the ground,
with invisible chains to make sure we drown,

and when tears fill the earth and the pits of our hearts,
that is the time in which our soul departs,
to heaven if it floats or to hell if it sinks,
that depends if our mind could break the chain links.

Copyright © enjoiskating6 ... [ 2005-03-08 00:31:41]
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Re: Hiding in the Shadow of the Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by axeman on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:41:35 AM AEST
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This is a great poem that i can relate to.
it is written really well.
Check out my poems and tell me what you think about them.

Re: Hiding in the Shadow of the Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:19:48 PM AEST
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This is a deep gem.

"im just counting the days that dont count themselves,
wasting away with these books i keep on my shelves, "

Oh how I could relate to that. I wish I had written it!

I'm just sitting here contemplating your words and meanings and I have to say i'm impressed.

Kie

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