Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	27-June 00:19:31 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 8693 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe [time] => 2002-12-16 18:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Burning itself to provide us light
Symbol of sacrifice so pure and white

If only people were that pure
our life would be much safe and secure

Weeping tears yet it has no eyes
one true thing in a world of lies

Don't you wonder why it cries!
Fading slowly until it dies

Calms your emotions,puts you in a trance
At dinner table adds some romance

Strong inside but apparently weak
Saying all yet it doesn't speak

Shining realities through our shadow
Revealing the deepest and the shallow

Peacefully in my room away from scramble
Join me all ,let's learn from the Candle [comments] => 4 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 21 [informant] => gina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe

Contributed by gina on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Burning itself to provide us light
Symbol of sacrifice so pure and white

If only people were that pure
our life would be much safe and secure

Weeping tears yet it has no eyes
one true thing in a world of lies

Don't you wonder why it cries!
Fading slowly until it dies

Calms your emotions,puts you in a trance
At dinner table adds some romance

Strong inside but apparently weak
Saying all yet it doesn't speak

Shining realities through our shadow
Revealing the deepest and the shallow

Peacefully in my room away from scramble
Join me all ,let's learn from the Candle

Copyright © gina ... [ 2002-12-16 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 07:48:49 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I gots it at the line where it's crying. This is beautiful. Truly. And I totally get it, because I burn candles to calm myself, they are majestic.

YS

Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by snagamuffin on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 08:35:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hey, I just wanted to say that was a pretty cool poem, and I really liked it.

Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:28:35 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh beautiful this is, this poem needs to be engraved into the side of a beautiful candle of your choice of color, i think i would take it somewhere and have it engraved in like that.......and hey this would make a great christmas present to....geez gina thanks for sharing this one its beautiful....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: SyMbOL OF SaCriFiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:48:30 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I wonder where you got all that talent all of a sudden, but it's great! great job Gina, but don't forget your studies :P

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com