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Array ( [sid] => 87086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => fragile [time] => 2005-03-10 17:54:24 [hometext] => no one can understand this one the way i understand it, so please go ahead and interprete it, relate it to you own lives. Id be happy to hear how you interpret it [bodytext] => Youre shorter than them, with my eyes I see
you swerve to get past, shoulders hunched.
always defeated, your quiet soul you hide
a lifetime of pain, a lifetime of doubt, i see

I watch for you, you insecure man
i know you, i see your pain
but you are not alone

all over the fragile ones walk
shrouded in a layer that is rarely penetrated
when the fragility is shown, confusion surrounds you
no one knows how to hold you like a human being

but I see you, you fragile man
open your eyes
and you will see me too [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 48 [informant] => eden [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

fragile

Contributed by eden on Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:54:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Youre shorter than them, with my eyes I see
you swerve to get past, shoulders hunched.
always defeated, your quiet soul you hide
a lifetime of pain, a lifetime of doubt, i see

I watch for you, you insecure man
i know you, i see your pain
but you are not alone

all over the fragile ones walk
shrouded in a layer that is rarely penetrated
when the fragility is shown, confusion surrounds you
no one knows how to hold you like a human being

but I see you, you fragile man
open your eyes
and you will see me too

Copyright © eden ... [ 2005-03-10 17:54:24]
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Re: fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 02:04:22 PM AEST
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very ambigious piece of work. well done

Re: fragile (User Rating: 1 )
by Maxximus on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:39:05 PM AEST
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The world is full of these fragile ones, real humans hidden behind a weakness but holding true merit and character. we/they may be beaten down at times but in weakness we find strength, and we find others. That's my take on it... I've felt that way before. An outcast, doubtful, vulnerable... either way, right or wrong, it was a good piece on a good subject.

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