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Book Of Riddles
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:17:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In crimson seas of hatred scorn
Blood red like a fingered thorn
Where fires burn in pregnant lies
So turning to enchanted cries
Writing in this riddled form
These words on page my gift reforms
This rancour drives me to traverse
To open up and free my curse
Beyond twilight i see my dreams
Through the skies and all the screams
Reality becomes my place to hide
Its where my heart just drops, subsides
Trapped inside this mirrored prism
My soul is shattered into schisms
So ill leave you now with gentle verse
From this gift inside my curse
Amongst the clouds the heavens sail
Where Angels sing a holy grail
I see them sit, they move and fiddle
'Hes the one, the books of riddles!'
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Re: Book Of Riddles
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:29:46 PM AEST
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Blood red like a fingered thorn
lovely...i liked the whole thing, very well written, great use of words & rhyming!
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Re: Book Of Riddles
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:31:37 AM AEST
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Nice.
I must admit to fearing the 'riddle' rhyme - the only other pure alternative to the one you've chosen is 'middle'. Its not exactly the best of matching words.
Well done, Luke. |
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Re: Book Of Riddles
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by pURePOISON on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:54:59 PM AEST
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| I Love it completely amazing darling, snaps for you! |
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