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On the canvas of the day
Painting a new path

The dew embraces
Anxious feet with candid arms
A new journey waits

The blue sky above
Offers friendship and freedom
All-encompassing

Dirt is the cushion
That will one day become mud
Today its a friend

Nature Converges
The great symphony of Life
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Saikuru III - (5 Sunbeams)

Contributed by Xnoybis on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:31:54 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Sunshine is the paint
On the canvas of the day
Painting a new path

The dew embraces
Anxious feet with candid arms
A new journey waits

The blue sky above
Offers friendship and freedom
All-encompassing

Dirt is the cushion
That will one day become mud
Today its a friend

Nature Converges
The great symphony of Life
We are but cycles

Copyright © Xnoybis ... [ 2005-03-12 02:31:54]
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Re: Saikuru III - (5 Sunbeams) (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 03:42:20 AM AEST
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Cool concept... is this an established form or one you made up? I've never heard of the Saikuru before... what does that word mean (if this is something you created)? Though haiku are definitely more fitting to the japanese language, it's still a fun form to play around with, and very different from the European or Arabic forms that are far more common in our culture today at that. Keep it up... This form deserves the love you've given it. Peace. Butterat Zool.

Re: Saikuru III - (5 Sunbeams) (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:51:51 AM AEST
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This one makes me feel good. A very pleasant read.

Re: Saikuru III - (5 Sunbeams) (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:00:31 AM AEST
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I'm a bit daft. I didn't realize these were haikus.
Brilliant again. I like this one the best.

*hugs* Phil xx

Re: Saikuru III - (5 Sunbeams) (User Rating: 1 )
by chazthepoet on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:06:09 PM AEST
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you have good talents for writing haikus

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