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Mind Pollution
Contributed by
diatribe
on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:40:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see that commercial
Reflecting from the set
In your once beautiful eyes
And it reminds me of addiction
It reminds me of starlit script-readings
Where the ends never justifies the means
And I change the channel
While you apply the Chanel
And the smell makes me drunk with lust
It would have been anger but I simply forgot
Point and click Im over it
Desperation marks the spot where
The X once held its place on the map
But like I said before
We simply forget
Where was I before all of this?
Before the flicker from a box
Became so hypnotizing
Before life passed us by
Where was I?
Copyright ©
diatribe
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2005-03-12 14:40:27]
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Re: Mind Pollution
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:39:09 PM AEST
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Such a haunting poem written with such an
undertone of loss. I don't really know what
else to say except I loved this poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Mind Pollution
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by electrique_poet on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:54:54 PM AEST
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this was great, dark and chilling
well done
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Re: Mind Pollution
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:00:09 PM AEST
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| wow.. this is amazing.. well done |
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