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That, while tasting like buttermint, sounds feels truly mellow

I’m a feather, I’m fluffy
I’m soft and light gray
You’re a cloud white and puffy
You’re a pillowy quay
And I sink into you—no more need to allay

I’m a waif and I’m drifting serenely around
I’m like down from a quilt and I’ve ne’er touched the ground
You’re a cloud and you’re floating
You’re so doting, devoting
Both of us glide with our slim silver coating

All I see is pastel
Pinks and yellows and blues
We’re both under the spell
Of Serenity’s hues
And there’s nothing to do but to rest and to muse

Each tiny hair tingles as you caress my skin
Sighing calm spreads right through me as though it’s always been
Your kisses dissolve like a mint melt-away
I become lullaby instead of light gray
And our bodies succumb while our souls dance and play
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I am a feather and you are a cloud...

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The sun shines down in a sweet soft yellow
That, while tasting like buttermint, sounds feels truly mellow

I’m a feather, I’m fluffy
I’m soft and light gray
You’re a cloud white and puffy
You’re a pillowy quay
And I sink into you—no more need to allay

I’m a waif and I’m drifting serenely around
I’m like down from a quilt and I’ve ne’er touched the ground
You’re a cloud and you’re floating
You’re so doting, devoting
Both of us glide with our slim silver coating

All I see is pastel
Pinks and yellows and blues
We’re both under the spell
Of Serenity’s hues
And there’s nothing to do but to rest and to muse

Each tiny hair tingles as you caress my skin
Sighing calm spreads right through me as though it’s always been
Your kisses dissolve like a mint melt-away
I become lullaby instead of light gray
And our bodies succumb while our souls dance and play

Copyright Â© liquidsunshine ... [ 2005-03-12 19:51:05]
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Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:24:42 PM AEST
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This poem is wonderful....so relaxing! Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Carol

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:35:45 PM AEST
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ohhh... this is exquisite... sooo pretty!!! hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:14:35 AM AEST
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that was awesome Chelsea I loved it. I hope
things continue to go well with your guy. I
liked the rhyming in this it was really neat.
Yeah I just loved this poem I am not sure
really what else to say.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:28:13 AM AEST
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Chels this was reallt nice and simple. Very relaxing like Carol said LOL.

I enjoyed this poem it has a dreamy mood to it.

Hugs,
Jane ^_^

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:02:23 PM AEST
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I am floating on this cloud. So calming and peaceful.

A magnificent poem I really enjoyed reading

Love Angelxxxx

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:51:26 PM AEST
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great work chelsea.

Johnny.

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:23:03 PM AEST
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Interesting images, and very nice work here, my friend. Very serene. It sounds great when read aloud.

Andrew

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:18:50 PM AEST
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Imagery was captivating, romantic, and serene. I loved it, Chelsea.
~Carrie~

Re: I am a feather and you are a cloud... (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:01:16 PM AEST
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This was awesome! I liked the end most of all, the last stanza, that is.
Another of my favorites.
Take care.
David

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