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Its hard to want this life.
Damn, its even harder,
To put down the knife.

Dont tell me you love me,
Dont tell me you care.
Dont tell me that,
You spend your time wishing i was there.

Its hard to breathe,
Its hard not to cry.
Believe me, its even harder,
To not wanna die.

Dont tell me i matter,
Dont tell me i belong.
Dont you dare,
Tell me that im wrong.

Its hard to explain,
Please dont make me try.
Its bad enough,
That i wanna die.

Dont tell me its not hard,
That just isnt true.
If you were in my position,
You too, wouldnt know what to do.
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Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:50:21 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Its hard to feel wanted,
Its hard to want this life.
Damn, its even harder,
To put down the knife.

Dont tell me you love me,
Dont tell me you care.
Dont tell me that,
You spend your time wishing i was there.

Its hard to breathe,
Its hard not to cry.
Believe me, its even harder,
To not wanna die.

Dont tell me i matter,
Dont tell me i belong.
Dont you dare,
Tell me that im wrong.

Its hard to explain,
Please dont make me try.
Its bad enough,
That i wanna die.

Dont tell me its not hard,
That just isnt true.
If you were in my position,
You too, wouldnt know what to do.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-03-13 00:50:21]
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Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 01:01:32 AM AEST
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okay, i wont tell you any of those things, but i will say this is a beautiful expression of feelings and a poem of well woven words:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 02:38:19 AM AEST
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Great writing.
Maybe u should try-n-talk about it.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy

Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:15:05 AM AEST
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WOW!!! this was brilliant, very good writing and i love the overall flow and pattern of the poem.

Jane

Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:45:05 PM AEST
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I just read your poem and well I reli though it was awsome and all but, I hope you dont wana die. your Prolly a amazing person and if you ever need a friend im around. ~~Crystal~~

Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:10:38 AM AEST
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Great poem, it's truely amazing. Full of deep feelings, and emotions. Great Write.

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