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Array ( [sid] => 87330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Haunted House [time] => 2005-03-13 06:40:40 [hometext] => In tribute to Edgar allen Poe, master of the macabre. God rest your soul and wherever it haunts [bodytext] => Look up
and gaze upon
the haunted house
where the ghosts dwell

Upon the hill
where wooden splintered hands
break through the earth
and crooked fingers reach out
into the swirling black sky

Walk up the path
through the rust encrusted ancient gateway
don't step on the cracks
you're going to need the luck

Tread the wooden steps
green, cracked and peeling
untended for an age
Step out of the rain
and through the door
Greet the familiar smell of time
and decay

Step forward
Close the door behind you
like mother taught
silence, all but the sound of the howling wind outside
and the deafening scream
of the dark

Look around you
Browned, netted curtains
mask the cracked, stained windows
peeling ruby red wallpaper rotten to the boards

The tick of the Grandfather
clock, long since stopped
drumps into the mind
a sinister heartbeat
tick, tick, tick

The chains of the past rattle
You shriek a muffled
cry of terror
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Haunted House

Contributed by glu1 on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:40:40 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Look up
and gaze upon
the haunted house
where the ghosts dwell

Upon the hill
where wooden splintered hands
break through the earth
and crooked fingers reach out
into the swirling black sky

Walk up the path
through the rust encrusted ancient gateway
don't step on the cracks
you're going to need the luck

Tread the wooden steps
green, cracked and peeling
untended for an age
Step out of the rain
and through the door
Greet the familiar smell of time
and decay

Step forward
Close the door behind you
like mother taught
silence, all but the sound of the howling wind outside
and the deafening scream
of the dark

Look around you
Browned, netted curtains
mask the cracked, stained windows
peeling ruby red wallpaper rotten to the boards

The tick of the Grandfather
clock, long since stopped
drumps into the mind
a sinister heartbeat
tick, tick, tick

The chains of the past rattle
You shriek a muffled
cry of terror
Welcome Home




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Re: Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:34:02 AM AEST
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Oh, what a good one. Poe (a favorite of mine)could not have done better himself.


Re: Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 09:38:01 AM AEST
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Great poem! The personification is inspiring and beautiful, perfect for the task for which it is needed. Your descriptions are wonderous and creative. Your metaphors are amazing, and executed well. This poem is great! Poe would be proud. Nice Write.


Re: Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by whispered_cries on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:41:24 PM AEST
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this is honestly one of the best poems i've ever read...seriously..good write..keep it up
take care
laura


Re: Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 02:58:33 PM AEST
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Nice write.Its similar rythm of that of the Beating Heart By Poe . Niceily Done

Whisper


Re: Haunted House (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:16:45 PM AEST
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excellent brilliant image filled wicked, i love this poem! hugs n' love nessa

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