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How can you say good-bye when every inch of your body desire's ones touch?
The way I feel in his presence
How I love him so much,
he doesn't know the aching in my soul.
My chest tightens when I know he's near
Every moment with him I hold dear
Every muscle in my body aches for just one touch,
my lips yearn to meet with his just one more time
To feel him,
once again alone in the dark,
with just our two beating hearts
Sharing together
a moment of passion that complete satisfaction
to share the love we once knew.

Last updated on 03-14-2005 @ 02:52 pm
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Can't Let Go

Contributed by lovesucks on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 02:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

How do you know when it's over?
How can you say good-bye when every inch of your body desire's ones touch?
The way I feel in his presence
How I love him so much,
he doesn't know the aching in my soul.
My chest tightens when I know he's near
Every moment with him I hold dear
Every muscle in my body aches for just one touch,
my lips yearn to meet with his just one more time
To feel him,
once again alone in the dark,
with just our two beating hearts
Sharing together
a moment of passion that complete satisfaction
to share the love we once knew.

Last updated on 03-14-2005 @ 02:52 pm

Copyright © lovesucks ... [ 2005-03-14 14:59:18]
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Re: Can't Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 08:29:47 AM AEST
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I have felt this way before with letting someone go and wanting to feel him in my arms once more and kissing him once more... It was the hardest thing to get over and it took me a while to get over it all together... The memories of what had happened between us and what he did still upsets me but I have someone new... I liked this poem..

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Christina

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