Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	09-June 20:25:33 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 87490 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You. [time] => 2005-03-14 22:43:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Anxiety consumes me
Thoughts racing through my mind
Wondering when it will stop...
Why must it always be you?
Haunting my dreams, invading my thoughts
Teasing me constantly
You disappear once I open my eyes
I try to say that I dont care
all the love has been washed away..
Along with my pride.
But how I feel is draining too slow
Frightful it will never all fade away.
Through times of anguish
I would turn to you
And now I wish you would erase-
Take back every kiss and word exchanged
Restore my heart back to unbreakable
I can't help but thinking back
back on the days we exchanged smiles
a moment in time frozen in my thoughts
The temperature rises....
and you're gone. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 22 [informant] => peacelovhppnes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

You.

Contributed by peacelovhppnes on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Anxiety consumes me
Thoughts racing through my mind
Wondering when it will stop...
Why must it always be you?
Haunting my dreams, invading my thoughts
Teasing me constantly
You disappear once I open my eyes
I try to say that I dont care
all the love has been washed away..
Along with my pride.
But how I feel is draining too slow
Frightful it will never all fade away.
Through times of anguish
I would turn to you
And now I wish you would erase-
Take back every kiss and word exchanged
Restore my heart back to unbreakable
I can't help but thinking back
back on the days we exchanged smiles
a moment in time frozen in my thoughts
The temperature rises....
and you're gone.

Copyright © peacelovhppnes ... [ 2005-03-14 22:43:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: You. (User Rating: 1 )
by stover on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

How could we ever go back and I can feel your anguish entwined with a dream of pure love that has been .. well... crushed.
I am sorry for that. Don't give up, there is a dream realized.

Re: You. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:03:19 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

amazing portrayal of your feelings...ur really talented...looking forward to reading more...

Re: You. (User Rating: 1 )
by HerDa on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:12:58 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Ceasless kindness of Jah will help to overcome everything in this life, even the very life!

Re: You. (User Rating: 1 )
by brains_of_the_insane on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 02:57:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I really like how you can express your emotions. I really like your stlye of writing!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com