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Children bear crying faces, hiding beneath the covers
Fear and anger mix together in a raging soupbowl.
This is the end of an era, of a group.
This is the last fight.
There are no more chances.
And please don't beg, child, don't make this worse.
As if this isn't hard enough on the victim.
He wants it to last. To continue.
But it will not.
His face will become shattered.
The love has dissipated.
Our home has been broken. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 65 [informant] => b_rand [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Breaking Wood

Contributed by b_rand on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:09:35 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

A liquor bottles lies shattered on the floor.
Children bear crying faces, hiding beneath the covers
Fear and anger mix together in a raging soupbowl.
This is the end of an era, of a group.
This is the last fight.
There are no more chances.
And please don't beg, child, don't make this worse.
As if this isn't hard enough on the victim.
He wants it to last. To continue.
But it will not.
His face will become shattered.
The love has dissipated.
Our home has been broken.

Copyright © b_rand ... [ 2005-03-14 23:09:35]
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Re: Breaking Wood (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:05:10 AM AEST
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That's sad. Good job writing and describing it. Wish I had more to say.
Nice job.
~Waos/Kara

Re: Breaking Wood (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:43:48 AM AEST
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wow so sad .
well done.

Re: Breaking Wood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:49:19 PM AEST
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I can definately relate. Good write!!!!

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