Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	09-June 21:25:23 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 87586 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dolefully Trying [time] => 2005-03-15 20:54:55 [hometext] => for all my junkies [bodytext] => over and over again,
i'm left alone,
too much to stand,
you bare the unbearable,
you decieve the undecievable,
and you deliever the undelieverable.
and your still heard crying for help.
to discover that you were never without,
you were never alone,
or on your own.
your childish dreams,
and your careless wishes,
are dusted away.
your complaining thoughts,
are washed away,
the imprints are gone,
it's one thing to see,
another to visualize.
it's one thing to hear,
another to listen.
you seem to care,
and not care for yourself.
it's hard to try and put reality in front of the decisions you've made
as we pull your life from the car crash of your mind,
and the tracks on your arm, are like a 3 foot rail,
you can't breathe and you cant see me,
dont lie, dont you lie...
holding you, i can smell it in your eyes.
it's not going to hold you much longer, as you can see,
you can't see anything.... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 66 [informant] => Sirena_Degana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Dolefully Trying

Contributed by Sirena_Degana on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:54:55 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

over and over again,
i'm left alone,
too much to stand,
you bare the unbearable,
you decieve the undecievable,
and you deliever the undelieverable.
and your still heard crying for help.
to discover that you were never without,
you were never alone,
or on your own.
your childish dreams,
and your careless wishes,
are dusted away.
your complaining thoughts,
are washed away,
the imprints are gone,
it's one thing to see,
another to visualize.
it's one thing to hear,
another to listen.
you seem to care,
and not care for yourself.
it's hard to try and put reality in front of the decisions you've made
as we pull your life from the car crash of your mind,
and the tracks on your arm, are like a 3 foot rail,
you can't breathe and you cant see me,
dont lie, dont you lie...
holding you, i can smell it in your eyes.
it's not going to hold you much longer, as you can see,
you can't see anything....

Copyright © Sirena_Degana ... [ 2005-03-15 20:54:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Dolefully Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 04:39:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i so hear ya, well done

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com