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Array ( [sid] => 8760 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Miss You [time] => 2002-12-17 17:40:00 [hometext] => This was written for my friend after he died. [bodytext] => I lay in my bed late at night,
Hoping that I might,
Change the things that are not right.
It's unbearable to think,
You're not here.
So long ago
Yet it seems like yesterday
You said you'd be back,
But you never did.
You didn't know when you got into your car,
That another who was drinking too much,
Would be driving.
The doctors said you
Wouldn't make it through the night,
They may have been right,
But you'll always live on in my heart.
You are my best friend. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 16 [informant] => 15caitlin15 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Miss You

Contributed by 15caitlin15 on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I lay in my bed late at night,
Hoping that I might,
Change the things that are not right.
It's unbearable to think,
You're not here.
So long ago
Yet it seems like yesterday
You said you'd be back,
But you never did.
You didn't know when you got into your car,
That another who was drinking too much,
Would be driving.
The doctors said you
Wouldn't make it through the night,
They may have been right,
But you'll always live on in my heart.
You are my best friend.

Copyright © 15caitlin15 ... [ 2002-12-17 17:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:14:28 PM AEST
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So very sad! This happened to my friend as well,its tough! Good write! Christina

Re: Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 01:45:18 AM AEST
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This is so sad that you lost your best friend this way....my heart is right there....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:41:11 AM AEST
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Erin!!!!!!

This is Awesome! And welcome to YPDC!!!!!

Jaime

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