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Array ( [sid] => 87640 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i remember when [time] => 2005-03-16 13:09:02 [hometext] => wrote this for a intro to creative writing class years ago...i changed the title today [bodytext] => age of darkness

13 shrouded by fear
chewing on darkness
swallowing razor sharp shrouds of life
lost~alone~silent

emotions placed on a sleeveless shirt
sleeveless shirt from one thread
pulled~pulled~free
from the body of this 13 year old
little girl lost

blood dripping on the floor
dripping down the arm
exposed by the sleeveless shirt
mutilate~cut~incision
on the body of this 13 year old
little girl scarred

silent sobs, calmness enters
enters the mind
devoid~numb~motionless
throughout the body of this 13 year old
little girl dead
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 61 [informant] => unrestrained19 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

i remember when

Contributed by unrestrained19 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:09:02 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

age of darkness

13 shrouded by fear
chewing on darkness
swallowing razor sharp shrouds of life
lost~alone~silent

emotions placed on a sleeveless shirt
sleeveless shirt from one thread
pulled~pulled~free
from the body of this 13 year old
little girl lost

blood dripping on the floor
dripping down the arm
exposed by the sleeveless shirt
mutilate~cut~incision
on the body of this 13 year old
little girl scarred

silent sobs, calmness enters
enters the mind
devoid~numb~motionless
throughout the body of this 13 year old
little girl dead

Copyright © unrestrained19 ... [ 2005-03-16 13:09:02]
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Re: i remember when (User Rating: 1 )
by hotrod55 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:48:48 PM AEST
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i can relate when i was 13 i used to cut....(bet ya didnt want to know that eh) but anyway great job

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