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Array ( [sid] => 87684 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Touched Me [time] => 2005-03-16 20:13:53 [hometext] => I knew a girl once like you [bodytext] => The murmer of chatter filled the room
I had to come
Pictures of artwork filled the walls
Farm scenes shade trees a lady setting in a hall
In small groups people greet talk and stand
Grasping hand
Hearts beating out of tune
No one can answer not one
I noticed you there beyond the flowers
Looking like you primped for hours
A sleeping beauty
I say this truly
No one knows how angels are born
My thought your too young
No one knows the mind of Creation
Only that it is of perfection
I gaze upon your beautiful face
Feeling of being out of place
I see your Grand parents your Mother and Dad
As them I feel terribly sad
I once knew a girl like you
Beautiful too
I can see you streching your wings
In front of The Maker of all things
Feeling the smile om His face
Seeing you filling a bag of grace
An angel is born to be a helper of man
Family comes first and to help now you really can
Patitions of sadness worry in prayer
Emerald you are given power to always be near
Take our patitions before the Lord
For an angel is always heard
I wish I had known you when you were here
If I can,can I ask a favor
I once knew a girl as beautiful as you
She is an angel too
Rebecca is her name
Tell her I'll see her again


To new angel
Emerald
"You touched me"

Sinned






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You Touched Me

Contributed by sinned on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:13:53 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



The murmer of chatter filled the room
I had to come
Pictures of artwork filled the walls
Farm scenes shade trees a lady setting in a hall
In small groups people greet talk and stand
Grasping hand
Hearts beating out of tune
No one can answer not one
I noticed you there beyond the flowers
Looking like you primped for hours
A sleeping beauty
I say this truly
No one knows how angels are born
My thought your too young
No one knows the mind of Creation
Only that it is of perfection
I gaze upon your beautiful face
Feeling of being out of place
I see your Grand parents your Mother and Dad
As them I feel terribly sad
I once knew a girl like you
Beautiful too
I can see you streching your wings
In front of The Maker of all things
Feeling the smile om His face
Seeing you filling a bag of grace
An angel is born to be a helper of man
Family comes first and to help now you really can
Patitions of sadness worry in prayer
Emerald you are given power to always be near
Take our patitions before the Lord
For an angel is always heard
I wish I had known you when you were here
If I can,can I ask a favor
I once knew a girl as beautiful as you
She is an angel too
Rebecca is her name
Tell her I'll see her again


To new angel
Emerald
"You touched me"

Sinned










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Re: You Touched Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:29:29 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs,
emy


Re: You Touched Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:32:21 PM AEST
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This gave me wicked goose bumps, I enjoyed it so much.. This is a beautiful piece of work...

*Hugs ~N~ Love*
**Britnee**


Re: You Touched Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 01:58:42 AM AEST
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Quite powerful...
I liked the bitter-sweetness of it all, coz that's the way of life :)
Wistful in places- and yet very real, inspired.
I like the way it ended too.




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