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alone
Contributed by
unrestrained19
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 01:57:59 PM in AEST
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you just dont write enough anymore she says
in between the ptrs and the shot the ducks
where are you going with this
i pause to light a cigarette and reflect
are the words inside of you anymore
defensively answer yes of course
there is always time and time for everything
pointed nose grows
i thought there would be always be anyway
she says i dont believe in you anymore
redundant anymore redundant
five cigarettes later reveal the truth
she left years ago
i am having this conversation with myself
alone
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Re: alone
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:10:21 AM AEST
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Good write.
I luv the change in pace.
keep writing.
huggs,
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