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Array ( [sid] => 87875 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where can I start? [time] => 2005-03-18 11:29:26 [hometext] => i havent wrote much lately so i decided it was about time i start up again...please read and comment..i really appriciate your oppinions [bodytext] => I sit here with my pen
Just wondering what to say

Theres so many emotions
Running through my mind each day

I'm not sure where to start
So that people will understand

Exactly how it feels
To be stuck within this dreamland

So far away from realitly
Not sure of where I belong

And not sure of what to do
I've just been waiting for so long

For something to come way way
That I can call my own

I'm so sick of this longing
To be more than just a clone

So God, if you can hear me
Please listen to what I say

Guide me to your light
And help me find my way [comments] => 5 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 62 [informant] => allymp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

Where can I start?

Contributed by allymp on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:29:26 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

I sit here with my pen
Just wondering what to say

Theres so many emotions
Running through my mind each day

I'm not sure where to start
So that people will understand

Exactly how it feels
To be stuck within this dreamland

So far away from realitly
Not sure of where I belong

And not sure of what to do
I've just been waiting for so long

For something to come way way
That I can call my own

I'm so sick of this longing
To be more than just a clone

So God, if you can hear me
Please listen to what I say

Guide me to your light
And help me find my way

Copyright © allymp ... [ 2005-03-18 11:29:26]
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Re: Where can I start? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:22:15 PM AEST
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Allymp
I like this,but think you could have done better with a little more thought.
PS. I had to chuckle at your typ-error "For something to come my way way"
I have done the same thing in a hurry to post I guess.
You girl keep writing you are good and can only get better.
This world needs people like You.

Sinned
ps.too--thanks for all your comments on my writings.

Re: Where can I start? (User Rating: 1 )
by RavenShadows on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:32:14 AM AEST
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Great job, keep up the good work.

Re: Where can I start? (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:13:17 PM AEST
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I loved your write....
I know what you are going through...
I have not been posting lately....your poem is exactly what I went through...and I am sure others too....!
I well written honest poem...
cheer!!~

Re: Where can I start? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 08:27:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. The flow was great. I really enjoyed this piece. Nice work :-)

Re: Where can I start? (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:21:56 PM AEST
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Excellent work in a uniquely laid out poem. The subject matter was so relatable too, about a place where so many of us have come to at one point or another. nicely done

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