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My Beautiful Land...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:02:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Warm breezes...
Hushed whispers from the waves in the distance...
Crystal, cerulean skies...
The world seems to breathe with you,
A long,
Slow,
Sigh of,
FREEDOM.....
A tropical paradise of sorts,
But this one is mine...
My own special haven,
Of blissful,
SOLITUDE...
Overwhelmed by prystine ocean, all around me,
Infinite, Calm,
ABYSS....
I take in a breath,
Of salty pleasure,
And I know...
I
AM
HOME...
The birthplace of my mother and father,
And every generation before...
An island,
Long Forgotten...
The essence that flows through
My
Veins...
CUBA
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-03-18 14:02:48]
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Re: My Beautiful Land...
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 02:48:25 PM AEST
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wow that was amazing work for 10 minutes :) brilliant
pix xx |
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Re: My Beautiful Land...
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:32:07 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I ENJOYED THE
EXPERIENCE . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: My Beautiful Land...
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:50:15 AM AEST
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Took my breath away. There is no place like home.
Simply supreme in 10 mins you managed to capture the beauty of this land.
Well done bravo
Distinction for sure
love Angelxxxx |
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Re: My Beautiful Land...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:53:55 AM AEST
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Hi Stephy...this is absolutely beautiful and so picturesque!
Enjoyed this write of one of my Caribbean Inlands...
Thank fou for sharing this...and also for your lovely comment on my last post....
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: My Beautiful Land...
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by Sagacious on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:41:13 PM AEST
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| My dear friend! So many months have I known you, yet only recently have I learned of your strong Cuban connection. Shame on me, I say! In these few lines you have brought the old Cuba--dignified, yet sultry; proud, yet humble--to life for me in a way that it never has been before. All this in ten minutes of an English assigment! Bless you, sweet Fleur--always! More to come, -KAC- |
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Re: My Beautiful Land...
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:58:25 PM AEST
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as amazed as all others that this was together in ten minutes ... a true testament to your poetic mind Stephy ~
A beautiful tapestry of words ... and images.
Nazmythian ~ |
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