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[sid] => 8792
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => not alone
[time] => 2002-12-18 04:30:00
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[bodytext] => Sad eye's, they still look at you ,,
no smiles to give,, no tears to shed,,
nowhere to go,,no one to hold,.
just in dreams,,and dreams alone,,
no time to play,, no life to live,,
nothing to gain,,but time all alone,,
no where to go ,,no one to hold,,,
they have their dreams and dreams alone,,
fallen children of child abuse,,
your not alone,,we've been there years ago,,
we faught to get away ,,
but now were here to stay,,
beatings and alchol,,was my day,,
beatings and drugs are your's,,
I'll be there for you ,,no matter what,,
for I have been there,,once myself,,
I stood up for what I believed,,
now so should you,,
you have a choice in life,,,
to live your life the best you can,,
stay focused on your goals,,
never give it to anyone,,
you'll suceed,,a better person,,
your dreams and your goals,,
but remember the childhood,,
that you will never forget,,
learn from it ,,at its best,,
your dreams,,and your dreams alone,,
( if you see a child all alone hold him and tell him that he's not alone,,)
craig s. meeks
[comments] => 4
[counter] => 262
[topic] => 39
[informant] => spooky
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Grief
)
not alone
Contributed by
spooky
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Sad eye's, they still look at you ,,
no smiles to give,, no tears to shed,,
nowhere to go,,no one to hold,.
just in dreams,,and dreams alone,,
no time to play,, no life to live,,
nothing to gain,,but time all alone,,
no where to go ,,no one to hold,,,
they have their dreams and dreams alone,,
fallen children of child abuse,,
your not alone,,we've been there years ago,,
we faught to get away ,,
but now were here to stay,,
beatings and alchol,,was my day,,
beatings and drugs are your's,,
I'll be there for you ,,no matter what,,
for I have been there,,once myself,,
I stood up for what I believed,,
now so should you,,
you have a choice in life,,,
to live your life the best you can,,
stay focused on your goals,,
never give it to anyone,,
you'll suceed,,a better person,,
your dreams and your goals,,
but remember the childhood,,
that you will never forget,,
learn from it ,,at its best,,
your dreams,,and your dreams alone,,
( if you see a child all alone hold him and tell him that he's not alone,,)
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2002-12-18 04:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: not alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:09:13 AM AEST (User
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Craig,another great peice here very touching write! made me cry! Christina |
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Re: not alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 04:24:05 PM AEST (User
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My god you have a way with words...this made me cry so bad...geez...thanks for sharing this one craig it's beautiful and has such a beautiful message behind it...
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Re: not alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:07:59 PM AEST (User
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Sigh.....such a beautiful and touching write... such compassion shown... Great work.
Jenni |
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Re: not alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by notsocallous on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 06:01:36 AM AEST (User
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It's been a long time since I felt what your poem made me. A lifting in my chest but not in a joyful manner. I felt truely moved.
Thank you. |
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