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Array ( [sid] => 8809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My War Cry [time] => 2002-12-18 15:23:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => WE TRY TO SLAY THE DEAMONS THAT PREVAIL INSIDE
FORE WE’RE NOT DEAD WHEN WE DIE
OUR PRIDE KEEPS US ALIVE
THE SOULS OF THOSE BEFORE US REMAIN IN A STATE OF UNREST
UNTILL WE RISE UP AGIANST THE BEAST WHO IS HELL SENT
SO DRAW YOUR WEAPONS AND LITTER THE BATTLE FIELD WITH THE BLOOD OF YOUR ENEMY
THE FAMILIES OF THOSE WHO OPPOSE WILL BE LEFT TO GRIEVE
WE HAVE NO ROOM TO STOP, WE HAVE NO RIGHT TO LOSE
IF DEATH SO CHOOSES TO INTRUDE
WILL YOU GO KNOWING THAT YOU IMPROVED
IMPROVED UPON AN EXISTANCE PLAGUED BY LIES AND DECIET
I DISPIZE THE VERY THING THAT MY ADVESARIES STRIVE ON AND BELIEVE
MOVE DESCRETE WITH NOTHING BUT DESTRUCTION IN OUR PATH
KEEP BUSTIN’ ON THOSE IN OUR WAY SPARING NO ONE IN OUR WRATH
FOLLOW ME AND I’LL TAKE YOU TO A NEW STAGE
NO CAGE WOULD HOLD US BACK AS WE DESCEND INTO A DEEP RAGE
THEY TOOK OUR LIVES AND LEFT OUR SOULS TO WAIT
‘TILL WE WIPE OFF OUR SOCIAL FACES AND START TO RETALIATE
IT HAS BEGUN, CAN U FEEL IT, NOW WE’RE AT WAR
HEARTLESS IN THE STRUGGLE, STRAIGHT EVIL TO THE CORE
YOUR MIND SET HAS TO BE THAT WAY TO ACHIEVE VICTORY
REDIRECT THE MISLEAD AND CONVINCE THEM NOT TO FLEA
A BLOOD STAINED SWORD WASHED AWAY BY THE RAIN MARKS THE DAY WHEN THE INNOCENT HAS DIED IN VIEN
PRAY FOR THE FALLEN BROTHERS WHO WERE KILLED FOR THE CAUSE
LIVE STRONG AND TRY TO OBEY ALL OF GOD’S LAWS
TRUST ME ALWAYS AND I WILL NEVER LET U DOWN
MY LOYATY TO THE HOMMIES IS FOREVER PROFOUND
SO WHEN THE FOG IS LIFTED AND THERE IS NO ONE ELSE LEFT
FEAR NOT, FOR I SHALL BE THER EVEN AFTER MY DEATH.

The End
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My War Cry

Contributed by young_houlagin on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:23:12 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

WE TRY TO SLAY THE DEAMONS THAT PREVAIL INSIDE
FORE WE’RE NOT DEAD WHEN WE DIE
OUR PRIDE KEEPS US ALIVE
THE SOULS OF THOSE BEFORE US REMAIN IN A STATE OF UNREST
UNTILL WE RISE UP AGIANST THE BEAST WHO IS HELL SENT
SO DRAW YOUR WEAPONS AND LITTER THE BATTLE FIELD WITH THE BLOOD OF YOUR ENEMY
THE FAMILIES OF THOSE WHO OPPOSE WILL BE LEFT TO GRIEVE
WE HAVE NO ROOM TO STOP, WE HAVE NO RIGHT TO LOSE
IF DEATH SO CHOOSES TO INTRUDE
WILL YOU GO KNOWING THAT YOU IMPROVED
IMPROVED UPON AN EXISTANCE PLAGUED BY LIES AND DECIET
I DISPIZE THE VERY THING THAT MY ADVESARIES STRIVE ON AND BELIEVE
MOVE DESCRETE WITH NOTHING BUT DESTRUCTION IN OUR PATH
KEEP BUSTIN’ ON THOSE IN OUR WAY SPARING NO ONE IN OUR WRATH
FOLLOW ME AND I’LL TAKE YOU TO A NEW STAGE
NO CAGE WOULD HOLD US BACK AS WE DESCEND INTO A DEEP RAGE
THEY TOOK OUR LIVES AND LEFT OUR SOULS TO WAIT
‘TILL WE WIPE OFF OUR SOCIAL FACES AND START TO RETALIATE
IT HAS BEGUN, CAN U FEEL IT, NOW WE’RE AT WAR
HEARTLESS IN THE STRUGGLE, STRAIGHT EVIL TO THE CORE
YOUR MIND SET HAS TO BE THAT WAY TO ACHIEVE VICTORY
REDIRECT THE MISLEAD AND CONVINCE THEM NOT TO FLEA
A BLOOD STAINED SWORD WASHED AWAY BY THE RAIN MARKS THE DAY WHEN THE INNOCENT HAS DIED IN VIEN
PRAY FOR THE FALLEN BROTHERS WHO WERE KILLED FOR THE CAUSE
LIVE STRONG AND TRY TO OBEY ALL OF GOD’S LAWS
TRUST ME ALWAYS AND I WILL NEVER LET U DOWN
MY LOYATY TO THE HOMMIES IS FOREVER PROFOUND
SO WHEN THE FOG IS LIFTED AND THERE IS NO ONE ELSE LEFT
FEAR NOT, FOR I SHALL BE THER EVEN AFTER MY DEATH.

The End

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Re: My War Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:42:23 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc... Altho this is not really my kind of topic, I enjoyed this...and it's well written except for some minor spelling errors.. (I hope you are not offended by my saying this..) Great imagery also...
Jenni

Re: My War Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 06:03:20 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this alot it's different and unique in it's own way....thanks for sharing this piece...and welcome to YPDC i look forward to reading more of your poetry...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: My War Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by young_houlagin on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 04:47:25 AM AEST
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Thank u for responding i appriciate that. I'm not offended in any way by you pointing out my spelling errors. In alot of my peoms i do it on purpose but your right i do have spelling errors that I didn't mean. It's all good though as long as people know what I mean. Once agian thanks for responding.

Re: My War Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by young_houlagin on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 04:50:37 AM AEST
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Thanks for responding and i'm glad that u like it. i'm also glad that u took the time to read it i appriciate that.

Re: My War Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by adsalamon on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 05:46:54 AM AEST
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:)

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