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Array ( [sid] => 88108 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Freak Show [time] => 2005-03-20 17:16:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Like when the rain falls,
I can't see where I'm going.
My vision's getting blurry,
Pull me out and dry me off.

A storm inside my head,
My eyes are windows.
If you look inside them,
You will see the freak show.

A display of great lack of strength,
As everything caves in.
My walls can no longer crumble,
Because they don't exist.

Like my self confidence,
They've been gone for quite some time.
If you want me to let you in,
Take a number and get in line.

There's not too many people,
Who will be in front of you.
Everyone got tired of waiting,
And soon enough you will too.

It's not the greatest entertainment,
You will ever see.
Just standing there watching,
A girl hung from a tree.

No one will notice,
How nothing changes as she drops.
The ineffectiveness is amazing,
No one even stops.
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Freak Show

Contributed by allforyou on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:16:37 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Like when the rain falls,
I can't see where I'm going.
My vision's getting blurry,
Pull me out and dry me off.

A storm inside my head,
My eyes are windows.
If you look inside them,
You will see the freak show.

A display of great lack of strength,
As everything caves in.
My walls can no longer crumble,
Because they don't exist.

Like my self confidence,
They've been gone for quite some time.
If you want me to let you in,
Take a number and get in line.

There's not too many people,
Who will be in front of you.
Everyone got tired of waiting,
And soon enough you will too.

It's not the greatest entertainment,
You will ever see.
Just standing there watching,
A girl hung from a tree.

No one will notice,
How nothing changes as she drops.
The ineffectiveness is amazing,
No one even stops.

Copyright © allforyou ... [ 2005-03-20 17:16:37]
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Re: Freak Show (User Rating: 1 )
by DoomedCuthulu on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:27:48 PM AEST
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A brilliant poem. I found myself relating to the poem in many ways, Since I lost my self confidence a long time ago.
Keep writing.

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