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Array ( [sid] => 88119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mend This Broken Angel [time] => 2005-03-20 18:49:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hand me back my halo
Repair each broken wing
Redeem the graceful words
This angle longs to sing.

Un-cry the tears I've cried
Brighten my sky from grey
Put some hope beneath my wings
And I'll gladly fly away

Unstitch the smile I've sown
Make a face pure perfection
A gentle mind and thoughts
With joy in each reflection.

No burning crimsom tides
No craving for the knife
No voices cursing silently
'A pathetic, worthless life'.

Reason my existence
A reason just for me
I'm searching with blind eyes
That's why i can't see.

The light too far to reach
Temptation far too strong
This angels falling slowly
But I know I'm often wrong.

So regenerate my faith
Put sight behind each eye
Mend this broken angle
And gracefully, I'll fly [comments] => 6 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SweetButSimple [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Mend This Broken Angel

Contributed by SweetButSimple on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hand me back my halo
Repair each broken wing
Redeem the graceful words
This angle longs to sing.

Un-cry the tears I've cried
Brighten my sky from grey
Put some hope beneath my wings
And I'll gladly fly away

Unstitch the smile I've sown
Make a face pure perfection
A gentle mind and thoughts
With joy in each reflection.

No burning crimsom tides
No craving for the knife
No voices cursing silently
'A pathetic, worthless life'.

Reason my existence
A reason just for me
I'm searching with blind eyes
That's why i can't see.

The light too far to reach
Temptation far too strong
This angels falling slowly
But I know I'm often wrong.

So regenerate my faith
Put sight behind each eye
Mend this broken angle
And gracefully, I'll fly

Copyright © SweetButSimple ... [ 2005-03-20 18:49:49]
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Re: Mend This Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:54:38 PM AEST
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an amazing write with great flow!!! i love the way you write..this was just....awsome....you have amazing talent.

Re: Mend This Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:17:22 PM AEST
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wOW i LOVED THIS! GREAT WORK HERE! CHRISTINA

Re: Mend This Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 03:57:19 AM AEST
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this is a beautifully written poem. So touching and so heartfelt. Your verses flowed well and the imagery u cast in the readers head is just sensational. An excellent well written poem. Thanks for sharing it

Re: Mend This Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Amaterian_Angel on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:02:59 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem!!! Well done! LOVED IT!
Beautifully descriptive and imaginative!

Re: Mend This Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:20:57 AM AEST
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A beautifuly writen poem, such vivid imagery.
Well done.

Jane

Re: Mend This Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:23:56 AM AEST
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This was just beautiful. Wouldn't it be nice to have wings? To fly away from a situation you just can't handle? That would be awesome. Great write.

~Alucia~

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