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Array ( [sid] => 88122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Some How [time] => 2005-03-20 19:05:10 [hometext] => just something i got from a song just now tell me what you think and if you like it. [bodytext] => The sun is setting our life
is fading slowly and i am
tangled up in you, i am waiting
for you to say something to me
something to make me smile
and happy.

I am so worried i wont see
your face light up again
like that day we met, something
arent ment to be but you and me
i feel is and was supposed to be.

The first impression of you was
perfect something i had never felt
before, those eyes so blue and bright
is what drew me in.

That smile was something i had never
seen, and it is something i will NEVER
forget in my life, when you walk in a
room your smile lights it up.

Everything we went threw was bound
to happen i realize that, it was a great
thing and i will never forget it.

When ever you see the sun setting
over the snow covered mountains
think of me, its all i am asking for
its just something so special i want
to do with you and you only. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 22 [informant] => forgottenone_iam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Some How

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:05:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The sun is setting our life
is fading slowly and i am
tangled up in you, i am waiting
for you to say something to me
something to make me smile
and happy.

I am so worried i wont see
your face light up again
like that day we met, something
arent ment to be but you and me
i feel is and was supposed to be.

The first impression of you was
perfect something i had never felt
before, those eyes so blue and bright
is what drew me in.

That smile was something i had never
seen, and it is something i will NEVER
forget in my life, when you walk in a
room your smile lights it up.

Everything we went threw was bound
to happen i realize that, it was a great
thing and i will never forget it.

When ever you see the sun setting
over the snow covered mountains
think of me, its all i am asking for
its just something so special i want
to do with you and you only.




Copyright © forgottenone_iam ... [ 2005-03-20 19:05:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Some How (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:08:59 PM AEST
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what a lovely and sweetly written poem!




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