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Array ( [sid] => 88123 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Love (Join Me in Death) [time] => 2005-03-20 19:14:17 [hometext] => I Dedicate this to my "Only One" Without her i would be lost... [bodytext] => What loves hollow light,
Frigile but sweet,
And a judgement clouded,
By the darkest cloud,
Brought anger to my voice,
And but one sweet word,
An uttered tragity,
But hence the failed word,
Spoken to you in sleep,
I want to say I am sorry,
For all the times,
I made you cry for hours on end,
Theres no excuse,
No remedy for all the anguish,
But I only wish you could forgive me,
For my shallow heart bleeds,
For your sweet touch once more,
And if it need be,
I would take my life,
For one more moment in your arms,
Take it deep inside,
With all the sweetest kiss,
Only waits here in death,
Would you join me now,
Forever in Death,

And once hollow words,
Anger filled the room,
There was no turning back,
And my hollow heart bleeds,
The tears of my love,
Take my remorse,
Strait out of my heart,
My sweet words,
Braze your ears,
With all my heart,
I would take my life,
And throw it away,
If you would only forgive me,
And Join me in death [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 46 [informant] => suicidebringshappiness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => didactic )

My Love (Join Me in Death)

Contributed by suicidebringshappiness on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:14:17 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic

What loves hollow light,
Frigile but sweet,
And a judgement clouded,
By the darkest cloud,
Brought anger to my voice,
And but one sweet word,
An uttered tragity,
But hence the failed word,
Spoken to you in sleep,
I want to say I am sorry,
For all the times,
I made you cry for hours on end,
Theres no excuse,
No remedy for all the anguish,
But I only wish you could forgive me,
For my shallow heart bleeds,
For your sweet touch once more,
And if it need be,
I would take my life,
For one more moment in your arms,
Take it deep inside,
With all the sweetest kiss,
Only waits here in death,
Would you join me now,
Forever in Death,

And once hollow words,
Anger filled the room,
There was no turning back,
And my hollow heart bleeds,
The tears of my love,
Take my remorse,
Strait out of my heart,
My sweet words,
Braze your ears,
With all my heart,
I would take my life,
And throw it away,
If you would only forgive me,
And Join me in death

Copyright © suicidebringshappiness ... [ 2005-03-20 19:14:17]
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Re: My Love (Join Me in Death) (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:51:36 PM AEST
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well written i like it especially the line And my hollow heart bleeds,
The tears of my love,
Take my remorse,
Strait out of my heart
its beautiful

Re: My Love (Join Me in Death) (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticLicense on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:10:10 PM AEST
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... Uh, didactic poetry?

look up the word didactic, if you don't mind.

This was pretty well done,despite the dark overtone. But miscatagorized.

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