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Array ( [sid] => 88183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trying to be me [time] => 2005-03-21 09:38:07 [hometext] => My gudance councelor and i did this poem she is like the best person ever [bodytext] => Im trying to be the daughter you wanted
me to be
but its kind of hard because i want to be me
why cant you see its up to me to be the kind
of person i want to be

I can only be me
thats who I am
If that dont work
I'll eat a can of spam

Im really quite great
a young kid with spunk
I know that becaouse
God didnt make any junk

I know you were young
and being a mother is hard
but i was just born
that's pretty young too
what could i do? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 6 [informant] => cathy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Trying to be me

Contributed by cathy on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:38:07 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Im trying to be the daughter you wanted
me to be
but its kind of hard because i want to be me
why cant you see its up to me to be the kind
of person i want to be

I can only be me
thats who I am
If that dont work
I'll eat a can of spam

Im really quite great
a young kid with spunk
I know that becaouse
God didnt make any junk

I know you were young
and being a mother is hard
but i was just born
that's pretty young too
what could i do?




Copyright © cathy ... [ 2005-03-21 09:38:07]
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Re: Trying to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:42:57 AM AEST
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this is a very deep and emotional poem. i can see you've been through quite a lot. I wonder how old you are to understand such things...


Re: Trying to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:59:20 PM AEST
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How true,,,,the last paragraph....yeh what could you do as a baby....
all the best in your future being YOU!
[ps. Yuck ....I hate spam!]
cheers!~


Re: Trying to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:41:40 AM AEST
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i agree with what the others have said. it is indeed deep and emotional.
nice work.
Arden




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