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Trapped
Contributed by
yesi
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 03:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Trapped inside this lonely dark room,
can't find a way out,
all I see is despair,
someone please break me out,
break me out of this hell,
help set me free,
then we can run away,
run to a place where my emotions are lost,
trapped inside my own personal inferno,
with flames surounding me,
trapping me,
I'm suffucating,
someone let me breathe,
I'm drowing,
someone help me,
I can't breathe,
the pressure is killing me,
pushing me into nothing,
I'm falling,
can't get back up,
I can't move,
can't feel,
I'm trapped,
someone let me free...
Copyright ©
yesi
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2005-03-21 15:45:22]
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Re: Trapped
(User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:28:01 PM AEST
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| this is really good... i really liked it. i think the end dragged on for a little too long however. but otherwise great job |
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