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Array ( [sid] => 88411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Hell [time] => 2005-03-22 21:49:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You are trapped there now
All angels look down upon you
God weeps for his loss
But, after all, you get what you deserve
Your hell is not a hell of fire
Of burning forever
You have felt physical pain on earth
You are used to it
But no, your hell is much worse
It is mere nothingness
Like a desert, sand as far as the eye can see
Stones that you are forced to build on top
Of one another, forced by a slave driver
But why do you do this? You ask yourself
It has no meaning
You have no meaning
You are damned to spend eternity
Accomplishing nothing
This isn’t so bad at first, you say
But then the nothingness creeps inside of you
And never moving foreward
Hurts more, now
Than always moving backwards
As you did on earth
Welcome to your hell
Sit down, take a seat
You’ll be here for awhile [comments] => 1 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ataraxia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Your Hell

Contributed by Ataraxia on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:49:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You are trapped there now
All angels look down upon you
God weeps for his loss
But, after all, you get what you deserve
Your hell is not a hell of fire
Of burning forever
You have felt physical pain on earth
You are used to it
But no, your hell is much worse
It is mere nothingness
Like a desert, sand as far as the eye can see
Stones that you are forced to build on top
Of one another, forced by a slave driver
But why do you do this? You ask yourself
It has no meaning
You have no meaning
You are damned to spend eternity
Accomplishing nothing
This isn’t so bad at first, you say
But then the nothingness creeps inside of you
And never moving foreward
Hurts more, now
Than always moving backwards
As you did on earth
Welcome to your hell
Sit down, take a seat
You’ll be here for awhile

Copyright Â© Ataraxia ... [ 2005-03-22 21:49:52]
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Re: Your Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:09:02 PM AEST
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wow this is a very different and interesting write.. I can relate some of my anger with this.. awesome Job..

JENNI

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