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Array ( [sid] => 8859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => What would you say [time] => 2002-12-19 04:20:00 [hometext] => Once again my wife has told me to submit a poem. I thank those who have commented about the last one. Lets see if you like this one as well. My wife is buggin me to put the rest in a peotry book...so here is another test to see if I am any good. [bodytext] => What would you say,
If I gave to you my heart.
Would you cherish it always,
Or perhaps just rip it apart.

Would it make you happy,
If my soul and yours where one.
Would we be together forever,
Or would we come undone.

How would it make you feel,
If I took your hand in mine.
Would you pull away from me,
Or take it as a sign.

Could you ever believe,
In true love at first sight.
I’m not really sure,
But I think that you might.

Could you ever imagine,
That I would be your destiny.
Can you look into my eyes,
And see how much I love thee.

Would your knees get weak,
If I took you in my arms.
I must admit to you my dear,
I cannot resist your charms.

How would it make you feel,
To spend your life with me.
Being your devoted man,
Is all I long to be.

I will always make you happy,
Never letting you feel blue.
Look deep into this heart of mine,
And you’ll see my feelings are true.

What would you say to me,
If I said we are soul mates.
Would you finally realize,
That together we are great.

So put your trust in me,
And you will always feel secure.
Nothing could ever change my love,
Together we will endure.
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What would you say

Contributed by FireStorm12 on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

What would you say,
If I gave to you my heart.
Would you cherish it always,
Or perhaps just rip it apart.

Would it make you happy,
If my soul and yours where one.
Would we be together forever,
Or would we come undone.

How would it make you feel,
If I took your hand in mine.
Would you pull away from me,
Or take it as a sign.

Could you ever believe,
In true love at first sight.
I’m not really sure,
But I think that you might.

Could you ever imagine,
That I would be your destiny.
Can you look into my eyes,
And see how much I love thee.

Would your knees get weak,
If I took you in my arms.
I must admit to you my dear,
I cannot resist your charms.

How would it make you feel,
To spend your life with me.
Being your devoted man,
Is all I long to be.

I will always make you happy,
Never letting you feel blue.
Look deep into this heart of mine,
And you’ll see my feelings are true.

What would you say to me,
If I said we are soul mates.
Would you finally realize,
That together we are great.

So put your trust in me,
And you will always feel secure.
Nothing could ever change my love,
Together we will endure.

Copyright Â© FireStorm12 ... [ 2002-12-19 04:20:00]
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Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:04:03 AM AEST
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she will love you even more for this one,,
great stuff,,keep'm comin

Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:44:29 AM AEST
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Your wife is write,Really great peice here! Lovely! Christina

Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 10:54:50 AM AEST
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Your wife is a very smart lady...and she is right...you should put it all in a book. This one touched me deeply, i'll tell you what...it touched me so deeply that if you decide to put it in a book, i'll be one of the first to buy it! If that dont tell you somthing what will??? Listen to her lol...your wife knows what she's talkin bout..it's not hard to see talent like yours. Keep em' coming i'll be looking forward to the next poem you post...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:37:34 PM AEST
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this is definitely one of the best love poems that i have ever read.. no lie. I think that it would be any poets dream to get their work put in a book, so you should really go for it...
bis spater
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Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 09:06:29 PM AEST
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lovely work :*)

Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 04:11:04 PM AEST
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I'd say you are talented!!! The book---Go for it!! Believe me, it feels good to see your work in print.... Great poem here....
Jenni

Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by angelrae on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 03:40:59 PM AEST
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A beautiful love poem, a poem that can be so true in one's life, thank you for sharing.

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