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Array ( [sid] => 88651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Boys Lie [time] => 2005-03-24 22:47:21 [hometext] => All you guys out there - girls are scared because of you...one of you breaks a heart and then we can't give it to someone else. Girls deserve respect. [bodytext] => I saw the look in your eyes...
I got scared.
I heard the tone in your voice...
I got scared.
I don't want this right now...
I hope you understand.
I'm sorry, but I just can't move on.
I loved someone for so long...
I don't wanna hear anymore love songs...
I don't wanna fall in love...
I don't wanna care...
I just want you to stay away. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => purecitrus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Boys Lie

Contributed by purecitrus on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:47:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I saw the look in your eyes...
I got scared.
I heard the tone in your voice...
I got scared.
I don't want this right now...
I hope you understand.
I'm sorry, but I just can't move on.
I loved someone for so long...
I don't wanna hear anymore love songs...
I don't wanna fall in love...
I don't wanna care...
I just want you to stay away.

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Re: Boys Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:32:02 PM AEST
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This is funny. I mean of all things....well...ya know...i can actually almost understand...but this...how do i say...
Ok, as writing goes it's ok it's good its got a good emotional grip going...
And then we come to the rest of it...or if you will, the subject. Now, i understand people get hurt, and i understand that everyone wants respect. But to say women deserve respect is rather silly...I mean, they do...i agree...but not because their women...they deserve it because their human, or even more, because they have life. I mean this sounds like one of those look at me I'm stong and i have to vomit my ideal all over the place because emotionally i'm actually rather a weak insecure individual who just needs somebody to care about me and love me and say nice honest things to me. Well, pebbles, I being honest with you. People have to earn respect. For instance, i know this stripper and she is always *****ing about how people don't respect her...but she's a stripper....she shows her body for money...she degrades herself and then expects respect. It doesn't work that way. You don't have to be emotionally cold or not feel pain or sadness to be strong. So many women hold back what they really feel because they thing showing their pain or love or sorrow is a weakness...well it's not..it's actually a greater strength.
As far as guys(boys) lying..well, they do. But so do women...I don't even know how many times i've heard I just want to be friends...or, no, there's no one else...
People lie. It's the way it is...it's part of life...you can't avoid it. Just learn to deal with it.

always, abraham

Re: Boys Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by purecitrus on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 04:25:14 PM AEST
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it's true abraham - thanks for your perspective...my emotions are running high right now and sometimes being hurt makes a person think it's all about them, but you're right, people have to earn respect...thanks for the insight - and I know...it's not all guys, just some. sorry if i offended you - i knew i was gonna get atleast one comment like yours.

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