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Array ( [sid] => 88779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Clone Of Him [time] => 2005-03-25 23:31:53 [hometext] => This is about my sister, it is quite self explainatory. Comments welcome. [bodytext] => She is so happy with the exception of despair
All she longs for is his love to know he's there
She misses his sweet tender kiss
Being in his arms is now a long loss bliss
They never talk anymore
When voices disappear one word is all she longs for

She forgets how her baby girl was created
Because this thing called love is over rated

Yelling and screaming leading to tears
So much has gone wrong this past year
She just wants to feel like she felt before
Wanted needed and so much more
Love and true affection
She despises what she now knows as her reflection

She can't seem to please him let alone herself
She feels like a broken toy thrown upon the shelf
Once adored and admired
Her times up she's expired

The only thing left to love is this beautiful baby girl
Made in vein and brought into this cruel world
Her precious blue eyes shine like a gem
Sadly she is a clone of him [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SimplyMe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Clone Of Him

Contributed by SimplyMe on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:31:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



She is so happy with the exception of despair
All she longs for is his love to know he's there
She misses his sweet tender kiss
Being in his arms is now a long loss bliss
They never talk anymore
When voices disappear one word is all she longs for

She forgets how her baby girl was created
Because this thing called love is over rated

Yelling and screaming leading to tears
So much has gone wrong this past year
She just wants to feel like she felt before
Wanted needed and so much more
Love and true affection
She despises what she now knows as her reflection

She can't seem to please him let alone herself
She feels like a broken toy thrown upon the shelf
Once adored and admired
Her times up she's expired

The only thing left to love is this beautiful baby girl
Made in vein and brought into this cruel world
Her precious blue eyes shine like a gem
Sadly she is a clone of him




Copyright © SimplyMe ... [ 2005-03-25 23:31:53]
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Re: Clone Of Him (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:34:54 AM AEST
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This leaves nothing 2 the imagination and that's the beauty of it, blew me away completely. . . **********


Dorian Chambers


Re: Clone Of Him (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:31:23 AM AEST
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This is an outstanding piece of poetry so very well written and expressed. So much heartfelt words behind this one. I only know too well this horrible situation. Much peace to u all my friend and may things work out for ur sister.
An excellent portrayed poem.
Hugs,
Sue


Re: Clone Of Him (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:48:20 PM AEST
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wow this was amazingly written, well worth 5/5
pix xx


Re: Clone Of Him (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 09:51:21 AM AEST
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She may look like him..but she is still precious, she is a part of your sister.

This is a beautiful write, but so very sad.
I hope your sister is better soon.

Phil


Re: Clone Of Him (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:26:22 PM AEST
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A brilliant write. The clone of him and your sister will bring sunshine in to her life.
For a mothers love goes deeper than any love. She will lift up her spirits and comfort her always.
I hope her heartache heals soon.

Love angelxxxx




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