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Array ( [sid] => 88894 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Tiniest Water [time] => 2005-03-26 23:52:19 [hometext] => This will probably get worked on so much it'll probably be something completly different in the end ^_^ ciao, abraham [bodytext] => It is in the tiniest water, stirring in the rain, that I can find your love for me.
You are far from me now. Still, I can remember the smallest move you made.
The way you touched your cigarette so roughly, pulling the weight of the flame into your fingers. I can remember your straight, black hair and curls, your propensity for laughter, your brown eyes. The most beautiful brown eyes.
I have no way to see you. My only photo of you lost long ago. I can remember you through the saddest songs. I can see you in each word; every tiny strand of your skin, sweat, and sand across your toes.
I cannot say, you were my ocean, my sea storming and forgotten. I cannot say, my love is the open candle to light thy way across a falling star. I cannot say, I love, because I do not love. It has been too long now.
You were alone and I loved. You were surrounded and I loved. You were simple and I loved. You were simple, and i could not bring myself to love.
I never danced with you. I never held you when I did not want to hold. I never cared enough. I did not love you. I did not love you because I did not love myself.
There are so many beautiful words that I couple clasp and chain to your name, that i could speak and sweep away your tears. But of all the grace and beauty that I can stow beneath my fingers, it is in the tiniest water, stirring in the rain, that all the love you had for me; that all the things i did not do; that all the love i did not love; come together, and color you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 48 [informant] => iodinelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
The Tiniest Water

Contributed by iodinelove on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 11:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It is in the tiniest water, stirring in the rain, that I can find your love for me.
You are far from me now. Still, I can remember the smallest move you made.
The way you touched your cigarette so roughly, pulling the weight of the flame into your fingers. I can remember your straight, black hair and curls, your propensity for laughter, your brown eyes. The most beautiful brown eyes.
I have no way to see you. My only photo of you lost long ago. I can remember you through the saddest songs. I can see you in each word; every tiny strand of your skin, sweat, and sand across your toes.
I cannot say, you were my ocean, my sea storming and forgotten. I cannot say, my love is the open candle to light thy way across a falling star. I cannot say, I love, because I do not love. It has been too long now.
You were alone and I loved. You were surrounded and I loved. You were simple and I loved. You were simple, and i could not bring myself to love.
I never danced with you. I never held you when I did not want to hold. I never cared enough. I did not love you. I did not love you because I did not love myself.
There are so many beautiful words that I couple clasp and chain to your name, that i could speak and sweep away your tears. But of all the grace and beauty that I can stow beneath my fingers, it is in the tiniest water, stirring in the rain, that all the love you had for me; that all the things i did not do; that all the love i did not love; come together, and color you.




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Re: The Tiniest Water (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:34:08 AM AEST
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wow this is an awesome write full of emotion very touching. i liked this poem alot

JENNI


Re: The Tiniest Water (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:01:19 AM AEST
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Don't change a thing as it's a masterpeice as is.
A heavenly work of art.
I'm swooning as the thoughts of such beauty fill my eyes.
luv, huggs,
emy




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