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Array ( [sid] => 8893 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Killing Me Softly [time] => 2002-12-19 18:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => it's mad peaceful laying in his arms
w/ him whispering in my ear
the pleasure is so overwhelming
as I begin to wipe my tears
In his arms I feel so protected
yes he is my security
cuz being even this close to him
he's kiling me softly
w/ words I neva even knew
that can melt away your pain
but i am always near him
it is he that i claim
staring in each others eyes is murder
but it's pleasure that comes along
holing him oh so close, i think
"now this is where i belong"
his eyes and mines can meet and talk
ain't no need for words to speak
sometimes i feel like i'm dyng
and slowly i close my eyes b/cuz i b/come so weak
cuz when his lips meet my lips
then we just formed a kiss
this kiss melts in your mouth not in your hands just like a Hersheys kiss
he breathes in the words i was going 2 speak
just took my breath away
he's like my druf, my deepest craving
i need him night and day
no need for weed to make me stoned
cuz he's a natural high
how can this person be so good?
i just ask myself why?
they say something that is too good to be true
isn't all that it may seem to be
but i'll ask you this one question
has anyone ever killed you softly? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 2 [informant] => sweetolbaby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Killing Me Softly

Contributed by sweetolbaby on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



it's mad peaceful laying in his arms
w/ him whispering in my ear
the pleasure is so overwhelming
as I begin to wipe my tears
In his arms I feel so protected
yes he is my security
cuz being even this close to him
he's kiling me softly
w/ words I neva even knew
that can melt away your pain
but i am always near him
it is he that i claim
staring in each others eyes is murder
but it's pleasure that comes along
holing him oh so close, i think
"now this is where i belong"
his eyes and mines can meet and talk
ain't no need for words to speak
sometimes i feel like i'm dyng
and slowly i close my eyes b/cuz i b/come so weak
cuz when his lips meet my lips
then we just formed a kiss
this kiss melts in your mouth not in your hands just like a Hersheys kiss
he breathes in the words i was going 2 speak
just took my breath away
he's like my druf, my deepest craving
i need him night and day
no need for weed to make me stoned
cuz he's a natural high
how can this person be so good?
i just ask myself why?
they say something that is too good to be true
isn't all that it may seem to be
but i'll ask you this one question
has anyone ever killed you softly?




Copyright © sweetolbaby ... [ 2002-12-19 18:00:00]
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Re: Killing Me Softly (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:29:18 PM AEST
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Very beautifully romantic! I liked it! Christina


Re: Killing Me Softly (User Rating: 1 )
by Snugglebear on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 01:03:24 AM AEST
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i LOVED your poem...keep them coming..it was great


Re: Killing Me Softly (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:07:21 AM AEST
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I like the style of writing you have here...and yes someone has killed me softly lol...this was a great write thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.




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