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Array ( [sid] => 88961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => so far away from where we used to be [time] => 2005-03-27 15:43:50 [hometext] => this was just written off the top of my head, its not the greatest, but its how i feel inside, and there is no error in the truth. [bodytext] => here i am
so far from you
but so close i feel
to where you are
i can close my eyes
and picture you
your arms around me
and hear your voice
tell me things
ive always wanted to hear
but i know its not real
and thats what hurts
i miss you alot
but it was for the best
i think it might be time
to put this to rest
you'll never change
and i have
things are different now
im so far away
from where we used to be
but things could be different
if you came to me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 2 [informant] => candi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

so far away from where we used to be

Contributed by candi on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:43:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

here i am
so far from you
but so close i feel
to where you are
i can close my eyes
and picture you
your arms around me
and hear your voice
tell me things
ive always wanted to hear
but i know its not real
and thats what hurts
i miss you alot
but it was for the best
i think it might be time
to put this to rest
you'll never change
and i have
things are different now
im so far away
from where we used to be
but things could be different
if you came to me

Copyright © candi ... [ 2005-03-27 15:43:50]
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Re: so far away from where we used to be (User Rating: 1 )
by PeaceLovHppnes on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:48:12 PM AEST
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I LOVED IT! it reminded me so much of something that i would write. You displayed your feelings so well and i can relate to every line. It hurts and ive finally realized that I will never be where i used to be...good luck to you. Keep your head up!!
xoxo

Re: so far away from where we used to be (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 04:51:01 PM AEST
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Awomse I can relate to this its something I have expierenced as well. You can never be where you once were. Things change and they never go back the way you want them too. good write~~Crystal~~

Re: so far away from where we used to be (User Rating: 1 )
by Sensommar on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:43:56 AM AEST
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sometimes it just cant be ..you know it with your head but your heart keep missing that other half...I think you describe that in an excellent way..Thank you Have a beautiful day, Pia

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