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Shadows of A Happy Ending
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 04:54:09 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Shadows of A Happy Ending
The silence extends
Inevitably to an end.
The connection is broken,
And wounds are open.
Hollow and alone,
And the fault's my own.
Shallow and cold
With my soul sold.
My heart was given and shattered.
Nothing matters
When the passion for life ends
For it to only become pretense.
Never love what's lost at any cost,
Because it takes your soul away
To leave pain in its place.
Copyright ©
essentially9
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:12:31 PM AEST
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| very deep write u have here. i'm always amazed by your last lines, and here we have no exception. the ending was so true, and really made you ponder things. Stunning stuff |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:24:42 PM AEST
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| This gave me goosebumps. Amazing write! |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:41:33 PM AEST
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Sad and so touching....
Jenni |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:09:06 PM AEST
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I hear that, sister.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 07:28:36 PM AEST
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really made me wonder...so sad though
the raven |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:35:52 PM AEST
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A sad emotional write written to perfection.
Outstanding as always.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:26:13 PM AEST
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Very emotional piece. Brings up many memories. Heart mending tape is always there when needed.
The Voice
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by Les4567 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:40:19 PM AEST
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This was a very well written poem Jen. I really liked it. You are so talented. Short simple and to the point, nice write.
~Les |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:43:40 PM AEST
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Do I really even need to say any thing?
Clark =] |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:58:10 PM AEST
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A very beautiful poem, worthy of it's prase in
every way . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 01:50:34 AM AEST
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"Hollow and alone,
And the fault's my own.
Shallow and cold
With my soul sold."
i agree w/ DorianChambers, it deserves all praise. Raw emotin expressed and written to perfection. Great write. |
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Re: Shadows of A Happy Ending
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:48:45 AM AEST
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And you say I'm better at titles?
Sheeesh. lol. Your title drew me right in, and I found a fantastic poem waiting.
I love this hun, if only it didnt sound quite like sadness. This is definatly heartwrenching, and I can relate as can others, obviously.
"The silence extends
Inevitably to an end.
The connection is broken,
And wounds are open."
I wish there was something I could say about this..
Great write hun,
Phil
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