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Array ( [sid] => 8924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Clock work [time] => 2002-12-20 11:40:00 [hometext] => ha ha ha i •LOVE• this poem! very submissive, thats why i like it... [bodytext] => You put the collar on me
And I drop to my knees
And begin to bark
This pain has never felt better

Open up the cage
Lead me in
Into the realm of dreams

If you will hurt me
Hurt me slowly
Put the chain on me
Tie the knot tightly

Open up the cage
Lead me in
Into the realm of stars

There where dreams have been
Wheels turn like clockwork
I celebrate passion
The pain is beautiful like you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 25 [informant] => gequetscht [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Clock work

Contributed by gequetscht on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



You put the collar on me
And I drop to my knees
And begin to bark
This pain has never felt better

Open up the cage
Lead me in
Into the realm of dreams

If you will hurt me
Hurt me slowly
Put the chain on me
Tie the knot tightly

Open up the cage
Lead me in
Into the realm of stars

There where dreams have been
Wheels turn like clockwork
I celebrate passion
The pain is beautiful like you




Copyright © gequetscht ... [ 2002-12-20 11:40:00]
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Re: Clock work (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:57:55 PM AEST
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Yes it is very submissive, one who is collared as such usually is submissive to a master or mistress, but to bare pain upon one in this manner would make this person masochistic..it's amazing what sitting on the floor for hours at a time going through all the emotions one could possibly go through to learn what part of submission is deep within themselves...and have that numbing tingling feeling run through...i think the problem here to many times in life is that the submissive and the mistress/master dont tell all to eachother and the communication is lacking somewhere...but not in every situation....i see this poem as a treat me as your dog type as well...and this is fine if the two couples are willing to do this with one another....thanks for sharing this one ...it took me back in time...
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