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One Sided Love
Contributed by
o7neves
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:07:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Shes cool, shes calm, collected
The one that I unfortunately selected
Why was my heart left so unprotected?
Eyes that make me cry
Lips that make me smile
She is everything and seductive
Making me in every which way so unproductive
Why do I care so much?
Yearning only for her touch
Every time I see her I get such a rush
So connected, so close, I cry
At the sight of a tear dropping from her eye
The need to have her hold me tight
My heart demanding she stay throughout the night
When will it give up this never ending fight?
My heart breaks in half
Only to know it was her I never had
My wanting wont ever go away
As long as I cant have her, it wont ever fade
Almost like something someone had forbade
Physically she can disappear
But in my mind shell always appear
That of course is my greatest fear
Shes my subconscious obsession
Wishing her to want to me in only my possession
I think its time I sat down at a therapy session
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Re: One Sided Love
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:18:27 AM AEST
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I think you might turn into me over this, by that I mean write lots of poems about the same thing, or same person I should say....I'll tell ya it does do some good though...This was wonderful, and the ending was great....but what really puts it all together is the title, lol :) u better start posting more, you're slackin :)
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Re: One Sided Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:31:52 AM AEST
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Very interesting poem.
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Re: One Sided Love
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:34:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
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