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Coz of a broken promise
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:55:17 AM in AEST
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Shes on the floor of her bathroom again
Legs gave in to body weight and she is bent
Her head rests over the toilet
Shes been cutting after she had promised to stop
She cut too deep this time and cannot not stand
Theres a banging on her door
Her boyfriend kicks it in
He sees her as she goes to cut again
So he tries to take the knife away
She stands and pushes him back into the wall
And thrusts the knife into his shoulder
She starts to cry as she hears him safe
At least you wont be able to cut anymore
She falls apart on top of him
His whole world came crashing down
He pulled the knife out
And picked her up from the floor
He rushed down stairs
And into his car
There was so much blood every where
His hands were as if permanently stained
Less than half way to the hospital
He starts to get dizzy and almost passes out
A cop passing by sees him and signals to pull over
He does. On the side of the road
The cop looks around at the inside of the car
And sees he sees his shirt and all the blood
The cop shouts out can you drive
And he answers back with a faint yes
The cop tells him to follow and so he does
At the entrance of the hospital
The cop calls for the medical team waiting for him
They go to the car and pull just her out
For he had died just seconds before
In her room as she recovers
Shes never cried so much
But she stops for a second
Then she starts again
For the doctor tells her
That she was able to keep her baby
Any more time
And it would have been lost
She was a very lucky girl
Not every story can have a happy ending
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Re: Coz of a broken promise
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 02:28:46 AM AEST
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Sad but written well. I happy to know it wasn't u that died.
huggs,
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Re: Coz of a broken promise
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:31:27 AM AEST
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What a horrific sad sad story.
Very well written Ben. Cannot say I enjoyed as this one is such a tragedy
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Coz of a broken promise
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:54:40 PM AEST
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wow...very deep
but a brilliant write nonetheless
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