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Array ( [sid] => 89316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Him [time] => 2005-03-30 09:27:10 [hometext] => Comment [bodytext] => The way he captured my heart
the one whom after school I could not part
A handsome face which was his
laying next to me I wish he were
On my shoulder I let him cry
the first love of mine
That arguement two weeks ago crossed my mind
I tried to end on good terms
I don't blame him for not being kind
I should have went after him that night
but I didn't want to start another fight
Who knew it'd be the last time I'd see him
the last time I'd hear his voice
the last time I held him
the last time I kissed him
the last words...I'd speak to him
Looking even more handsome there he ly
I never even got the chance to say good-bye
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Rogue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Him

Contributed by Rogue on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:27:10 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The way he captured my heart
the one whom after school I could not part
A handsome face which was his
laying next to me I wish he were
On my shoulder I let him cry
the first love of mine
That arguement two weeks ago crossed my mind
I tried to end on good terms
I don't blame him for not being kind
I should have went after him that night
but I didn't want to start another fight
Who knew it'd be the last time I'd see him
the last time I'd hear his voice
the last time I held him
the last time I kissed him
the last words...I'd speak to him
Looking even more handsome there he ly
I never even got the chance to say good-bye

Copyright © Rogue ... [ 2005-03-30 09:27:10]
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Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:36:55 AM AEST
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What a fantastic write, some parts of the poem did not rhyme but it didnt matter. You got you're message across and it was good.

Jane

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:49:19 AM AEST
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Very emotional and strong. I could feel the loss that the story evokes. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by guts_n_glitter on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:10:33 PM AEST
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good write
.-.x.-.

Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:47:39 PM AEST
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Rogue
Now this is a poem; very good--could have rymed better in a few spots,but extreemly good.
Painfuly,sad
Keep it up.I hope it is a made up story,but if not my condolences.

Sinned

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