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where was I?
Contributed by
graci
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:31:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i was walking on a green meadow
the morning breeze beckoning me to dance
the birds singing the music of life
the rabbits playing around lost in a trance.
You have made them all
yes i know
but i was wondering
when you made them so perfect...
when you made them so right...
where was I?
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2005-03-31 05:31:35]
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Re: where was I?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:56:56 PM AEST
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| why r u saying that? wheres your confidence in yourself? at least thats wat i understood from the poem. you, like all of us, were right there in the front line. |
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