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Array ( [sid] => 89461 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cut [time] => 2005-03-31 11:12:21 [hometext] => this was created after one of my friends attemted suicide [bodytext] => i push the blade agianst my wrist
i dont know why i make a fist
count the droplets one by one
i curse the day it all begun
it hurts so much to be letting go
i just wish someone would have known
my silent screams turn to hate
as if the world was my dinner plate
all this pain i have inside
my feelings i do hide
so now is time to bid fairwell
i know that im going strate to Hell
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Contributed by hotrod55 on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:12:21 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i push the blade agianst my wrist
i dont know why i make a fist
count the droplets one by one
i curse the day it all begun
it hurts so much to be letting go
i just wish someone would have known
my silent screams turn to hate
as if the world was my dinner plate
all this pain i have inside
my feelings i do hide
so now is time to bid fairwell
i know that im going strate to Hell

Copyright © hotrod55 ... [ 2005-03-31 11:12:21]
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Re: cut (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:18:01 AM AEST
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gosh, thats so sad. i hope you dont really cut, it's a terrible habit to get addicted to... one i have gone through myself, and now trying to break it is really hard to do. i hope you feel better soon, and if u ever need to talk you can PM me netime.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: cut (User Rating: 1 )
by Amanda_Interrupted on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:18:42 PM AEST
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I think this poem had a wonderful beginning but got weak towards the end. I think it also ended premature and spontaniously. Anyway, the beginning is powerful. Me, being a suicide survivor would say that you captured the feelings and thoughts very well. I hope your friend is doing well and getting the help she needs.

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